Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，直接描述天气状况，并避免无关内容。

예시: The weather where I live has been rainy and hot recently, which makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富词汇。

예시: I prefer cooler weather because it prevents me from sweating excessively, and it motivates me to go outside for activities like walking and hiking.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的词汇，并且句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer drier weather since it's been too wet lately, but I don't like very dry conditions because they irritate my sensitive nose and cause sneezing.

제안: 回答口语化且有语法错误。建议使用更正式的表达，注意句子结构和时态。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone app every day to decide what to wear.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并且句子结构更完整。

예시: I believe global warming causes more extreme weather, which is dangerous and could potentially damage our homes.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复。建议简洁表达，注意主谓一致，并避免重复词汇。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cooler and drier cities because such climates are better for my health and skin.

× Recently erased.

✓ Recently, it has been rainy.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整。应补充完整句子，使其表达清晰。

× I don't like the weather in my living room.

✓ I don't like the weather where I live.

“in my living room”指的是房间内的天气，语义不合适，应使用“where I live”表示居住地的天气。

× I prefer cooler weather than the weather in this time now because it will not make me too sweaty and I can have some mood to move out and go walking and hiking.

✓ I prefer cooler weather than the weather at this time now because it will not make me too sweaty and I can be in a better mood to go out and go walking and hiking.

“some mood”用法不当，应改为“be in a better mood”表示心情更好。

× Recently it is too wet for me so I prefer a drier weather, but I don't want the too dry weather because my nose are sensitive to the dry weather and it will make me no spluttering.

✓ Recently it has been too wet for me, so I prefer drier weather, but I don't want the weather to be too dry because my nose is sensitive to dry weather and it will make me sneeze.

“a drier weather”中“weather”是不可数名词，不用冠词“a”；“my nose are”主谓不一致，应为“my nose is”；“make me no spluttering”表达错误，应为“make me sneeze”。

× Yeah, I will check my phone app of the weather forecast every day so I can know that what to wear in that day.

✓ Yeah, I check the weather forecast app on my phone every day so I know what to wear that day.

“my phone app of the weather forecast”表达不自然，应改为“the weather forecast app on my phone”；“can know that what to wear”语法错误，应为“know what to wear”；“in that day”应为“that day”。

× I think the global warming will make the weather more extreme. So I think the climate change is a dangerous things. Maybe it will makes our home or house destroyed by the weather.

✓ I think global warming will make the weather more extreme. So I think climate change is a dangerous thing. Maybe it will make our home or house be destroyed by the weather.

“the global warming”不需要定冠词；“a dangerous things”单复数不一致，应为“a dangerous thing”；“it will makes”动词形式错误，应为“it will make”。

× Yes, of course I want to visit some cooler, drier cities because I think that weather are more friendly for my body and I can be more healthy and get some more get some healthier skin.

✓ Yes, of course I want to visit some cooler, drier cities because I think that weather is friendlier for my body and I can be healthier and have healthier skin.

“weather are”主谓不一致，应为“weather is”；“more friendly”比较级应为“friendlier”；“be more healthy”表达不自然，应为“be healthier”；“get some more get some healthier skin”重复且表达错误，应为“have healthier skin”。