Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' properly to connect ideas. For example, explain the weather simply and add one or two specific details.

예시: I live in a tropical climate, so the weather is usually hot and humid. During the monsoon season, we get heavy rainfall which lasts for several weeks.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has some mistakes. Try to finish your sentences and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words like 'because' to give reasons and add specific examples.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy drinking hot spicy juice, hot soup, and coffee. These drinks make me feel warm and comfortable in cold weather.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to speak clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference and give specific reasons.

예시: I prefer wet weather instead of dry weather because in winter I like to drink hot juice and spicy drinks. Sometimes, I also enjoy drinking coffee during rainy days.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and confusing. Try to answer directly and clearly. Explain when and how often you check the weather forecast and why it is important for you.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning because I live in an area with different microclimates. It helps me plan my day better.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct tenses and give clear examples. Use linking words like 'for instance' to introduce examples.

예시: Climate change has caused dramatic effects in my country. For instance, many areas have experienced unusual frost and severe flooding in recent years.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons and give specific details.

예시: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates. I especially enjoy places with regular rainfall because I love the rainy season and the atmosphere it creates.

× I live in the place where the climate and weather is tropical climate and that means the weather is very hot and humid and during the monsoon season there is a heavy rainfall and some heavy plots and some.

✓ I live in a place where the climate and weather are tropical, which means the weather is very hot and humid. During the monsoon season, there is heavy rainfall and some heavy downpours.

The subject 'climate and weather' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'a heavy rainfall' is uncountable, so 'heavy rainfall' is correct. 'Heavy plots' is incorrect; the correct term is 'heavy downpours' or 'heavy showers'. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× I actually fit for a cold weather instead of hot weather because in the cold weather I love to drink hot spicy juice, hot spicy soup, and I enjoy drinking coffee and.

✓ I actually prefer cold weather instead of hot weather because in cold weather I love to drink hot spicy juice, hot spicy soup, and I enjoy drinking coffee.

The phrase 'fit for' is incorrect here; 'prefer' is the correct modal verb to express preference. Also, 'a cold weather' should be 'cold weather' without an article. The sentence is completed properly without the trailing 'and'.

× I love we, we don't instead of dry weather, uh, because in the winter I, I would love to drink hot juice and spicy drinks, which is very much interesting for me. Sometimes I would love to drink coffee in.

✓ I love wet weather instead of dry weather because in winter I enjoy drinking hot juice and spicy drinks, which is very interesting to me. Sometimes I also like to drink coffee.

'I love we, we don't' is incorrect; it should be 'I love wet weather'. The phrase 'which is very much interesting for me' should be 'which is very interesting to me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun and article usage.

× Yes, of course I have a habit of checking weather forecast because I live in the microclimatic habitats in Nepal. Different microclimate variables the weather forecast during the month period because there was a.

✓ Yes, of course I have a habit of checking the weather forecast because I live in a microclimatic habitat in Nepal. Different microclimate variables affect the weather forecast during the month.

The sentence was incomplete and unclear. Added 'the' before 'weather forecast' and 'a' before 'microclimatic habitat'. The phrase 'Different microclimate variables the weather forecast' is corrected to 'Different microclimate variables affect the weather forecast'. The sentence is completed properly.

× In my country there was there is a dramatic effect that job due to climate change. For instance, there is a cloud frost happening in many parts of the country as well as there were there was flooding events.

✓ In my country, there has been a dramatic effect caused by climate change. For instance, there is cloud frost happening in many parts of the country as well as flooding events.

The phrase 'there was there is' is redundant; 'there has been' is appropriate for recent effects. 'Cloud frost' is uncountable, so 'a cloud frost' is incorrect. 'There were there was flooding events' is corrected to 'flooding events' without 'there were' or 'there was' because 'events' is plural and can stand alone here.

× As as of course I love do I love to do it popularity where regularly rainfall according in that area. And uh, I love the rainy season so that I love to enjoy the rainy city life.

✓ Of course, I love to visit popular places where there is regular rainfall. I love the rainy season because I enjoy the rainy city life.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repeated words and incorrect structure. 'I love do I love to do it popularity' is corrected to 'I love to visit popular places'. 'Where regularly rainfall according in that area' is corrected to 'where there is regular rainfall'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.