Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear and complete sentence describing the current weather and your location. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

예시: Currently, it is raining where I live, which is near a city called Kathmandu.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Provide a complete reason and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer cold weather because there are many activities to enjoy during winter, such as playing badminton and volleyball.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to explain your preference clearly with specific reasons and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer wet weather because during the rainy season, the grass grows well and the environment looks very beautiful.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and making sentences more natural.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work. It helps me plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I always take an umbrella with me.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to explain the effects of climate change clearly with examples and correct grammar.

예시: I think climate change has caused serious problems in recent years, such as extreme weather and damage to my hometown's environment, which affects people's daily activities.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience new weather conditions and learn about different cultures.

× Now the weather is raining like raining and I live in near this city which is called and.

✓ Now it is raining and I live near this city which is called And.

The phrase 'is raining like raining' is incorrect; 'is raining' suffices to describe the current weather. Also, 'in near this city' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' should be removed to correctly say 'live near this city'. The sentence also lacks clarity and proper noun capitalization.

× I prefer cold weather because. There are lots of activities we were done in winter season like playing badminton, volleyball.

✓ I prefer cold weather because there are lots of activities we do in the winter season like playing badminton and volleyball.

The phrase 'we were done' is incorrect; the correct form is 'we do' to indicate habitual activities. Also, 'because.' should be connected to the following sentence for clarity. 'Winter season' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the season.

× I prefer wet weather because in the rainy season everything will be perfect and the grass were grown and this. Season was very pretty, so that's why.

✓ I prefer wet weather because in the rainy season everything is perfect and the grass grows. This season is very pretty, so that's why.

'Will be perfect' is future tense but the context requires present tense 'is perfect'. 'Grass were grown' is incorrect; it should be 'grass grows' to indicate habitual action. 'This. Season' should be 'This season' without a period.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving from work. I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if raining is expected, I'm sure to take approach umbrella.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving work. I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to take an umbrella.

The phrase 'leaving from work' is incorrect; 'leaving work' is correct. 'If raining is expected' should be 'if rain is expected'. 'I'm sure to take approach umbrella' is incorrect; it should be 'I make sure to take an umbrella'. The article 'an' is needed before 'umbrella'.

× I think the effect of climate change in recent years was very dangerous because the the root of my hometown was very bad and many people experience lots of insufficient activities so.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years have been very dangerous because the roots of my hometown have been very bad and many people have experienced many difficulties.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' to match 'in recent years'. 'Was' should be present perfect 'have been' to indicate ongoing impact. 'The root' should be plural 'roots'. 'Experience' should be past perfect 'have experienced'. 'Insufficient activities' is unclear; 'many difficulties' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I would like to visit other other different cities. The climate was different. I would like to visit different country because I want to experience the weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other different cities. The climates are different. I would like to visit different countries because I want to experience different weather.

'Other other' is redundant; one 'other' suffices. 'The climate was different' should be 'The climates are different' to refer to multiple cities. 'Different country' should be plural 'different countries' to match 'visit'. 'Experience the weather' is vague; 'experience different weather' is clearer.