Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is informative but a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to keep your answer within 5 sentences and use correct tense and word forms. Also, avoid repeating words like 'even' twice in a sentence. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I live in Dhaka, Bangladesh, where the weather is mostly hot and humid all year. Because of the tropical climate, we get heavy rainfall during the monsoon season, which increases the humidity. Generally, the temperature remains high, especially in summer.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'Withers with and more'. Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating 'I feel' at the end. Keep your sentences concise and connected with linking words.

예시: I prefer hot and dry weather because I enjoy sunshine. It allows me to do outdoor activities, which make me feel happy and energetic. On the other hand, I dislike cold and damp weather because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

제안: Your answer contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'dry and hot paper' and 'makes me makes everything damp and informative'. Please focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer dry and hot weather because it is more comfortable for me. Wet weather makes everything damp and uncomfortable, and traveling becomes difficult. Also, I often catch a cold in wet weather, so I try to avoid it.

제안: Your answer is good but has a small mistake: 'rainforests' should be 'raincoats'. Also, try to use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often check the weather forecast, especially during the monsoon season, because rain can come unexpectedly. Therefore, I prepare by carrying umbrellas and raincoats so I don't get caught in the rain. Checking the forecast helps me plan my day better and avoid inconveniences.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors like 'For examples' and 'winter have become'. Use singular/plural forms correctly and try to use linking words like 'for example' and 'also'.

예시: Yes, I believe climate change has had a significant impact recently. For example, summers have become unbearably hot, and we often carry umbrellas because rain comes unexpectedly. Also, heavy rains during the monsoon sometimes cause flooding, and winters have become milder.

제안: Your answer is good but the phrase 'visit firstly because this is my ultimate travel destination' is unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like 'because' and 'since' properly.

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have heard that winters in some places are extremely cold, which fascinates me since I come from a tropical country with hot weather all year round. Experiencing such different climates would be an exciting adventure.

× Because it has a tropical climate, we experience a lot of rainfall in the monsoon season, which makes the earth even feel even more humid.

✓ Because it has a tropical climate, we experience a lot of rainfall in the monsoon season, which makes the earth feel even more humid.

The phrase 'makes the earth even feel even more humid' contains a redundancy with 'even' repeated twice and an incorrect word order. The correct form is 'makes the earth feel even more humid' where 'feel' is the base verb after 'makes'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer hot and dry Withers with and more because I really like the sunshine.

✓ I prefer hot and dry weather more because I really like the sunshine.

The original sentence contains a typo 'Withers' instead of 'weather' and an awkward phrase 'with and more'. The corrected sentence replaces 'Withers' with 'weather' and removes 'with and' to properly express preference. This correction fixes spelling and improves sentence clarity.

× I like doing out outdoor activities in the sun, it makes me feel very happy and energetic.

✓ I like doing outdoor activities in the sun; it makes me feel very happy and energetic.

The phrase 'doing out outdoor activities' is incorrect because 'out' is unnecessary and redundant. The correct phrase is 'doing outdoor activities'. Also, the comma should be replaced with a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses. This correction improves preposition use and sentence structure.

× On the other side, I don't like cold and damp weather, it makes me feel sad and uncomfortable and I feel.

✓ On the other hand, I don't like cold and damp weather; it makes me feel sad and uncomfortable.

The phrase 'On the other side' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'On the other hand'. Also, the sentence is a comma splice and ends with an incomplete phrase 'and I feel'. The correction replaces the phrase and fixes punctuation and removes redundancy for clarity.

× I prefer dry and hot paper because it is more comfortable for me with weather makes me makes everything damp and informative and it is very difficult to travel when it is raining.

✓ I prefer dry and hot weather because it is more comfortable for me; wet weather makes everything damp and uncomfortable, and it is very difficult to travel when it is raining.

The original sentence has 'paper' instead of 'weather', and the phrase 'with weather makes me makes everything damp and informative' is incorrect and confusing. The correction replaces 'paper' with 'weather', clarifies the sentence structure, and replaces 'informative' with 'uncomfortable' which fits the context. This improves word choice and sentence clarity.

× Yes, I often check the weather forecast specially during the monsoon season because rain can come unexpectedly where I live.

✓ Yes, I often check the weather forecast especially during the monsoon season because rain can come unexpectedly where I live.

The word 'specially' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis. This correction improves the use of adverbs for clarity.

× For examples, where I live, summers have become unbearably hot and we often have to carry umbrellas because rain comes unexpectedly.

✓ For example, where I live, summers have become unbearably hot and we often have to carry umbrellas because rain comes unexpectedly.

The phrase 'For examples' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'For example' when introducing an instance. This correction fixes the singular/plural usage for proper expression.

× Additionally, during the monsoon season, heavy rain sometimes cause flooding and winter have become milder.

✓ Additionally, during the monsoon season, heavy rain sometimes causes flooding and winters have become milder.

The verbs and nouns do not agree in number. 'Heavy rain' is singular, so the verb should be 'causes'. 'Winter' should be plural 'winters' to match 'have become'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and noun number.