Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“prefer to sunny days”应为“prefer sunny days”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I live in a very humid city where it often rains, but sometimes it's sunny. I prefer sunny days because I can hang out with my friends and enjoy outdoor activities instead of staying indoors all day.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“prefer to the hot weather”应为“prefer hot weather”。建议使用连贯的句子并补充具体细节，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer hot weather because even if it's very hot outside, I can use air conditioning at home to stay cool. For example, after a busy day at work, I always turn on the AC to relax comfortably.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱。建议理清思路，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明喜欢干燥天气的原因。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it's easier to stay comfortable and keep my clothes dry. Wet weather can be inconvenient, making it hard to drive and causing clothes to stay damp.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确说明习惯和频率。

예시: I don't check the weather forecast every day, but I usually check it before going outside. For example, if I have to go to work, I make sure to see the weather forecast to prepare accordingly.

제안: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子，具体说明气候变化的影响。

예시: I think climate change is getting worse, causing harmful effects on the environment. For example, pollution and trash damage nature, and extreme weather like heavy rain or storms happen more often.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“staples weather”不准确。建议简化句子，清晰表达想法，并使用正确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a city with a different climate because I am tired of the constant rain where I live. I find it hard to do outdoor activities with my friends in wet weather, and I enjoy being active.

× I'm living in a very humid city.

✓ I live in a very humid city.

The present continuous tense 'I'm living' is incorrectly used for a permanent state. Use simple present 'I live' to describe habitual or permanent situations.

× Most of the time it's raining, but sometimes it's sunny.

✓ Most of the time it rains, but sometimes it's sunny.

Use simple present tense 'it rains' to describe habitual weather patterns instead of present continuous 'it's raining'.

× I prefer to sunny days because I can hang out with my friends, Bros browsing in the supermarket, enjoy my time outside.

✓ I prefer sunny days because I can hang out with my friends, browse in the supermarket, and enjoy my time outside.

'Prefer to sunny days' is incorrect; 'prefer sunny days' is correct. Also, 'Bros browsing' is unclear and should be 'browse'. The sentence also needs 'and' before the last activity for correct coordination.

× Instead of staying all day long relaxing on the bed, I prefer to do some outside activities.

✓ Instead of staying all day long relaxing on the bed, I prefer to do some outdoor activities.

'Outside activities' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'outdoor activities' to describe activities done outside.

× I prefer to the hot weather because even though the temperature is very high but I can turn on the air condition in house make making sure my room is very cool instead of tolerating the bad weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather because even though the temperature is very high, I can turn on the air conditioner in the house to make sure my room is very cool instead of tolerating the bad weather.

'Prefer to the hot weather' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer hot weather'. 'Air condition' should be 'air conditioner'. Also, 'make making sure' is incorrect; use 'to make sure'. Missing article 'the' before 'house'.

× For example, if I finish my busy work coming back from company, I always turn on the AC at.

✓ For example, if I finish my busy work and come back from the company, I always turn on the AC.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Coming back from company' should be 'come back from the company'. The phrase 'turn on the AC at' is incomplete; remove 'at'.

× I prefer dry weather because if I feel thirsty I can keep myself hydrated, but if it's the wet weather, maybe I handle the clothes.

✓ I prefer dry weather because if I feel thirsty I can keep myself hydrated, but if it's wet weather, maybe I have to handle the clothes.

'The wet weather' is incorrect; use 'wet weather' without 'the'. 'Maybe I handle the clothes' is unclear; 'maybe I have to handle the clothes' is better.

× It could be dry at a short time.

✓ It could dry up in a short time.

'Dry at a short time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'dry up in a short time' to indicate drying quickly.

× I have to use the driving machine instead of driving naturally.

✓ I have to use the defogger instead of driving naturally.

'Driving machine' is unclear and incorrect. Possibly the speaker means 'defogger' or 'windshield wiper'. 'Driving naturally' is also unclear; possibly means 'driving normally' or 'without assistance'.

× That's a hassle for me.

✓ That's a hassle for me.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I don't get a good habit in checking the weather like every day, which means you can avoid some unexpected situation.

✓ I don't have a good habit of checking the weather every day, which means I can't avoid some unexpected situations.

'Get a good habit in' is incorrect; use 'have a good habit of'. 'Like every day' should be 'every day'. 'You can avoid' is inconsistent with the negative; should be 'I can't avoid'. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations'.

× But I prefer to check the weather before I go outside.

✓ But I prefer to check the weather before I go outside.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Maybe it depends on the situation.

✓ Maybe it depends on the situation.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× If I have to go to work, I usually check the weather.

✓ If I have to go to work, I usually check the weather.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I think it's getting worse and worse because of the bad weather cause the harmful effects to environments.

✓ I think it's getting worse and worse because bad weather causes harmful effects on the environment.

'Cause' should be 'causes' to agree with singular subject 'bad weather'. 'To environments' is incorrect; use 'on the environment'.

× At the same time people be harmed to environment through the trash everywhere.

✓ At the same time, people are harming the environment through trash everywhere.

'People be harmed' is incorrect; use 'people are harming'. 'Harmed to environment' is incorrect; use 'harming the environment'.

× It also may cause the bad weather like the soft rain like some other strong weather.

✓ It may also cause bad weather like light rain or other strong weather conditions.

'The bad weather like the soft rain like some other strong weather' is awkward. Use 'bad weather like light rain or other strong weather conditions'.

× Yes, I'm looking forward to visit a nice city which comes with a staples weather inside of raining every day and I'm a little bit tired of those wet weather because I always find it's very hard for me to start some outdoor activities with my friends, but I'm quite outgoing.

✓ Yes, I'm looking forward to visiting a nice city which has stable weather instead of raining every day, and I'm a little bit tired of that wet weather because I always find it's very hard for me to start some outdoor activities with my friends, but I'm quite outgoing.

'Looking forward to visit' should be 'looking forward to visiting'. 'Staples weather inside of raining every day' is incorrect; use 'stable weather instead of raining every day'. 'Those wet weather' should be 'that wet weather'.