Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What's the weather like where you live?
수험생
So Mccarroll located at around the quarter, so we have a warm weather and there is a rainy climate, climate. And so I do believe that's the weather's top for it, someone that's live in the like here or in the States.
시험관
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
수험생
Personally, I have never seen the wheels, no Sir. I want to move to somewhere that always have a cold weather and I want to have a chance or opportunities to get those amazing astonishing snow by myself.
시험관
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
수험생
Honestly I'm really sick about wet weather which makes me umm sweating all the days and I hate the feelings that's the wet clothes must stick to my skin. So personally dry weathers is my top choice.
시험관
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
수험생
As a tea person swing MBTI, I always plan my day at the morning. First thing that I'm gonna check when I woke up is the weather. It it allows me to have a estimations of the day and the feelings.
시험관
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
수험생
So there is lots of consequences of climate change like global warming which turns the average temperatures of the earth in different places become higher and there is a lot of extreme weather which brings an overwhelming ratings and flooding.
시험관
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
수험생
Yeah, I want to move on, move to a city step maybe at at the top of the Europe because I like cold and dry weather and I do believe that those kind of places suit my personal preferences and I have maybe better feeling.
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총점
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct statement about the weather, then add specific details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, mention the general climate and typical weather conditions without hesitation or filler words.
예시: I live in Mccarroll, which has a warm and rainy climate throughout the year. The weather is quite similar to what you might find in some parts of the United States.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
점수: 50.0제안: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid unclear phrases like "I have never seen the wheels". Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.
예시: I prefer cold weather because I have never experienced snow before. I would love to live somewhere cold so I can enjoy the beautiful snow and have new experiences.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like "umm". Also, correct grammar such as "dry weather is my top choice".
예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me sweat all day, and I dislike the feeling of wet clothes sticking to my skin.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer should be clearer and more grammatically correct. Avoid unnecessary details like MBTI unless relevant. Use linking words and correct verb tenses to improve coherence.
예시: I usually check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me plan my day and decide what to wear.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer covers important points but needs clearer structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct phrases like "overwhelming ratings" which is unclear. Be specific and concise.
예시: Climate change has caused global warming, which increases average temperatures worldwide. It also leads to extreme weather events such as heavy rainfall and flooding.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "move on, move to a city step". Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.
예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities in northern Europe because I enjoy cold and dry weather. I believe such places would suit my preferences and make me feel more comfortable.
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