Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免多余和不相关的信息，保持回答简洁且逻辑清晰。

예시: I live in a coastal city where the weather is usually hot and humid. It often rains during the summer, which makes the air feel heavy. I don't like this kind of weather because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，建议使用正确时态，简洁表达观点，并用连词连接句子使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer cold weather, especially winter. I enjoy wearing warm clothes like sweaters because they keep me comfortable and make me feel secure.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意句子完整性和语法正确，避免重复和不相关内容。

예시: I prefer dry weather because I live in a coastal city where it often rains in spring and summer. The rain makes the air humid and uncomfortable for me.

제안: 回答表达较为口语化且有语法错误，建议使用更正式的表达，注意句子结构和连贯性。

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast. Instead, I prefer to look outside when I wake up to decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

제안: 回答内容较为简略且句子不完整，建议补充具体细节，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I think climate change has caused many unusual weather patterns recently. For example, summers have become hotter than before, and winters are less cold.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用连词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, of course. I live in a southern coastal city where it never snows, so I have never seen snow before. I would like to visit a northern city with a cold climate to experience snow.

× You know I live in a coast city so the weather very hot and humid and it often rains happy days because of many type food.

✓ You know I live in a coastal city so the weather is very hot and humid and it often rains on happy days because of many types of food.

coast city 应为 coastal city，表示“沿海的城市”；weather 后缺少动词 is；many type food 应为 many types of food，表示多种类的食物。

× You know I live in a coast city so the weather very hot and humid and it often rains happy days because of many type food.

✓ You know I live in a coastal city so the weather is very hot and humid and it often rains on happy days because of many types of food.

句中缺少动词 is，导致时态错误，天气描述应使用一般现在时。

× I really don't like the this weather because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I really don't like this weather because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

the 和 this 不应同时使用，二者都是限定词，重复使用导致错误。

× Actually, I preferred cold weather, especially winter.

✓ Actually, I prefer cold weather, especially winter.

表达现在的喜好应使用一般现在时，preferred 是过去式，不符合语境。

× And I read that well in winter clothes like a sweater.

✓ And I feel well in winter clothes like a sweater.

原句中 read 用法错误，应为 feel，表达穿冬衣时的感受。

× And you know this costs can wrap my whole body up and it can make it can make me feel comfortable and the security.

✓ And you know these coats can wrap my whole body up and they can make me feel comfortable and secure.

costs 应为 coats，且 this 应改为 these 复数；the security 用法错误，应为 secure 形容词。

× I preferred dry weather and a very hot weather because I live in a closet and it always rains in the spring and summer.

✓ I prefer dry weather and very hot weather because I live in a coastal city and it always rains in the spring and summer.

preferred 应为 prefer，表达现在的喜好；closet 应为 coastal city。

× I preferred dry weather and a very hot weather because I live in a closet and it always rains in the spring and summer.

✓ I prefer dry weather and very hot weather because I live in a coastal city and it always rains in the spring and summer.

a very hot weather 中 weather 不可数，去掉冠词 a。

× It make the air become humid and uncomfortable and I could.

✓ It makes the air become humid and uncomfortable and I could.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 s，改为 makes。

× It make the air become humid and uncomfortable and I could.

✓ It makes the air become humid and uncomfortable, and I feel uncomfortable.

句子不完整，I could 后缺少内容，需补充完整表达。

× Actually I don't have this hobbies because I prefer to look outside when I wake up and I prefer to observe with outside by myself that I decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

✓ Actually, I don't have this hobby because I prefer to look outside when I wake up and I prefer to observe outside by myself so that I can decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

hobbies 是复数，this hobby 应为单数；observe with outside 用法错误，应为 observe outside；句子连接不当，需用 so that 表示目的。

× Actually I don't have this hobbies because I prefer to look outside when I wake up and I prefer to observe with outside by myself that I decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

✓ Actually, I don't have this hobby because I prefer to look outside when I wake up and I prefer to observe outside by myself so that I can decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

observe 后不应加 with，正确用法是 observe outside。

× Actually, I think there are many strange climate phenomenons recently and the environmental temperatures are rising.

✓ Actually, I think there are many strange climate phenomena recently and the environmental temperatures are rising.

phenomenons 是非标准复数形式，正确复数为 phenomena。

× For example, summer becomes hotter than before and the winter.

✓ For example, summer becomes hotter than before, and winter becomes colder.

句子不完整，缺少 winter 的谓语部分，需补充完整。

× Yes of course you know I live in across the city in the South and the city never snowed so I have never seen snow before.

✓ Yes, of course, you know I live in a coastal city in the South and the city never snows so I have never seen snow before.

across the city 应为 coastal city；never snowed 应为 never snows，表示现在的情况。

× Yes of course you know I live in across the city in the South and the city never snowed so I have never seen snow before.

✓ Yes, of course, you know I live in a coastal city in the South and the city never snows so I have never seen snow before.

never snowed 是过去式，描述现在事实应使用一般现在时 never snows。

× So I want to go to north city with cold climates and snow to enjoy the snow.

✓ So I want to go to a northern city with cold climate and snow to enjoy the snow.

north city 应为 northern city；climates 应为不可数名词 climate。