Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and unnecessary questions like "Where do I live?". Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples of outdoor activities.

예시: The weather where I live is warm and sunny, which makes me feel happy. The temperature is comfortable—not too hot or cold—so I enjoy outdoor activities like walking in the park or gardening, which help improve my mood and energy.

제안: Your answer is brief and lacks supporting details. Try to provide reasons or examples to explain why you prefer hot weather. Also, avoid informal phrases like "kinda" in formal speaking tests.

예시: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors, such as swimming or having picnics, which makes me feel joyful and energetic.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid repetition, and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather often makes the roads muddy and dirty, which is inconvenient when walking outside. In contrast, dry weather is cleaner and more comfortable for outdoor activities.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and informal. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use more formal language. Also, provide a clear frequency and reason for checking the forecast.

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly because I don't pay much attention to it. However, I do check it occasionally, especially before traveling, to prepare accordingly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and incorrect word choices. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide specific examples of climate change effects. Avoid vague or incorrect terms.

예시: I believe climate change has caused more frequent heavy rains and floods in recent years, which have affected many communities and the environment.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains informal fillers and some repetition. Try to speak more confidently and avoid unnecessary phrases like "you know". Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I would love to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather conditions and explore new places.

× when it when it is wet weather, it makes Rd. very muddy and very dirty.

✓ when it is wet weather, it makes the road very muddy and very dirty.

The word 'Rd.' is an abbreviation for 'road' and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify which road is being referred to. Also, 'Rd.' should be written out as 'road' for clarity in spoken language.

× While you walk you step on some dirty muds, it makes you very dirty.

✓ While you walk, you step on some dirty mud, it makes you very dirty.

The word 'mud' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'muds'. Using 'mud' without 's' is correct.

× I don't really take the weather forecast because I really don't care about it.

✓ I don't really check the weather forecast because I really don't care about it.

The verb 'take' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb to use with 'weather forecast' is 'check' to indicate looking at or consulting the forecast.

× I do think the effects of climate change in this recent year is it's very rainy nowadays and beside that floats and some soy Raisin have been occurred in in this year.

✓ I do think the effects of climate change in recent years are that it's very rainy nowadays and besides that, floods and some soil erosion have occurred this year.

Several issues: 'effects' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Beside' should be 'besides' to mean 'in addition to'. 'floats' is incorrect; the correct word is 'floods'. 'soy Raisin' is incorrect; likely intended 'soil erosion'. 'have been occurred' is incorrect; correct form is 'have occurred'. Also, 'in in this year' should be 'this year'.

× I want to experience the climate of different cities from where do I live.

✓ I want to experience the climate of different cities from where I live.

The phrase 'where do I live' is incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'where I live' without inversion, as it is a relative clause.