Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但可以避免重复表达“pleasant throughout the year”和具体季节描述的重复，且可以增加一些连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I live in Shenzhen, which enjoys a pleasant climate year-round. For example, summers are warm but not overly hot, while winters remain mild. Today, it's sunny with a comfortable temperature, making it a perfect day to be outdoors.

제안: 回答表达清晰，但存在语法错误（如“cold weather feel”应为“feels”），且句子连接可以更自然，建议使用更多连接词。

예시: I prefer cold weather because hot days often make me feel uncomfortable and sweaty, which affects my concentration. In contrast, cold weather feels refreshing and energizing, so I enjoy outdoor activities like walking during winter.

제안: 回答内容具体，但“shoes often get warm”表达不准确，应为“shoes often get wet”。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer dry weather because rain makes me feel uncomfortable. For instance, my shoes often get wet, which is quite annoying. Moreover, when the weather is dry, I can easily go outside for a walk or do outdoor activities without any problems.

제안: 回答自然且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复“checking the weather”。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning as it helps me decide whether to take an umbrella. I believe it's especially important to do this regularly during the rainy season.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，如“the effect... the most noticeably is”应调整，且“more milder”重复比较级。建议加强语法准确性和用词准确。

예시: I think the most noticeable effect of climate change in recent years is the rise in temperature. For example, summers have become hotter than before, and winters are milder.

제안: 回答内容丰富且表达清晰，但“different climate”应为“different climates”，且“snowing scenery”表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. Since I live in Shenzhen, which has a tropical climate, I've never seen snow before. If I get the chance, I want to experience snowy landscapes and try winter activities like building a snowman.

× By contrast, cold weather feel refreshing and energetic, and I enjoyed outdoor activities like walking during the winter.

✓ By contrast, cold weather feels refreshing and energetic, and I enjoy outdoor activities like walking during the winter.

主语“cold weather”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“feels”。另外，句中“enjoyed”时态不符合上下文，应改为一般现在时“enjoy”。

× I think the effect of climate change in recent years the most noticeably is the rise of the temperature.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years most noticeably are the rise of the temperature.

“effect”应为复数“effects”，因为气候变化带来的影响不止一个。

× For example, the summer is hotter than before and the winter is more milder.

✓ For example, the summer is hotter than before and the winter is milder.

“milder”已经是比较级，前面不需要加“more”，这是比较级的错误用法。

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climate.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates.

“climate”应为复数“climates”，因为指的是多个城市的不同气候。

× If I get the chance, I want to experience snowing scenery and try some winter activity like building a snowman.

✓ If I get the chance, I want to experience snowy scenery and try some winter activities like building a snowman.

“snowing”是动名词，不能用来修饰“scenery”，应使用形容词“snowy”。“activity”应为复数“activities”，因为指多种冬季活动。