Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显复杂且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词如“however”或“sometimes”来增强逻辑性。

예시: The weather where I live is usually hot and humid because it is near the equator. However, after it rains, it can become cool and sometimes windy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的语法，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I generally prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable. Although I need to wear more clothes, I don't feel sweaty like in hot weather.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（如makes应为make），且表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，简化句子，并用连接词增强逻辑。

예시: I prefer dry weather because when the air is humid, I feel sticky and uncomfortable. This problem does not happen in dry places.

제안: 回答不够直接，表达含糊且句子冗长。建议直接回答问题，简洁明了，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually check the weather forecast before planning my day. Although I don't check it every day, I do it often to avoid problems with my work or leisure activities.

제안: 回答内容不够准确且表达混乱，有语法和词汇错误。建议加强对话题的理解，使用准确的词汇和清晰的句子表达观点。

예시: Many people believe climate change is caused by humans, but I think climate has always changed naturally. For example, during the time of dinosaurs, the Earth was much drier.

제안: 回答较好，表达了观点和理由，但有重复词汇“if if”，且句子可以更简洁。建议注意避免重复，简化表达。

예시: I would definitely visit cities with different climates if I had the chance. It is a great way to broaden my horizons and learn more about the world and its people.

× I like dry weathers better because if there's too much water in the atmosphere it can makes me really sticky and uncomfortable in general, but it will not exist if you live in a dry environment.

✓ I like dry weather better because if there's too much water in the atmosphere it can make me really sticky and uncomfortable in general, but it will not exist if you live in a dry environment.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“weathers”。此外，“can makes”中的“makes”应为原形“make”，因为情态动词后接动词原形。

× I like dry weathers better because if there's too much water in the atmosphere it can makes me really sticky and uncomfortable in general, but it will not exist if you live in a dry environment.

✓ I like dry weather better because if there's too much water in the atmosphere it can make me really sticky and uncomfortable in general, but it will not exist if you live in a dry environment.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形，“makes”应改为“make”。

× But there is a lots wetter in the start of the hue.

✓ But there is a lot wetter in the start of the hue.

“lots”是复数形式，前面有不定冠词“a”时应使用单数形式“a lot”。

× But there is a lots wetter in the start of the hue.

✓ But there is a lot wetter at the start of the hue.

“a lot”是正确表达，且“wetter”前应使用“a lot”表示程度。

× But there is a lots wetter in the start of the hue.

✓ But there is a lot wetter at the start of the hue.

表示时间点时应使用介词“at”，而不是“in”。

× In cold weather it just need to wear more clothes when you get cooler but it can be always sweaty and hot weather.

✓ In cold weather, you just need to wear more clothes when you feel cold, but hot weather can always make you sweaty.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语，且表达不清晰。应明确主语和谓语，使句子通顺。

× In cold weather it just need to wear more clothes when you get cooler but it can be always sweaty and hot weather.

✓ In cold weather, you just need to wear more clothes when you feel cold, but hot weather can always make you sweaty.

“it”指代不明确，应使用“you”来表达一般情况。

× Well, seriously, I didn't stick to the frequency of it, but in general I do have the habit of it because I need to arrange my work or entertainment according to the weather instead of making lots of trouble from it.

✓ Well, seriously, I didn't stick to the frequency of checking it, but in general I do have the habit because I need to arrange my work or entertainment according to the weather instead of causing lots of trouble because of it.

“the habit of it”表达不自然，应明确“habit”指的是“checking the weather forecast”。“making lots of trouble from it”表达错误，应改为“causing lots of trouble because of it”。

× Well most people would say it is done by humans, but I don't think so because in geographical history there are always changes about climate, for example the much drier and era of dinosaurs.

✓ Well, most people would say it is caused by humans, but I don't think so because in geographical history there have always been changes in climate, for example, much drier periods during the era of dinosaurs.

“done by humans”用词不当，应为“caused by humans”。“there are always changes about climate”表达不准确，应为“there have always been changes in climate”。“the much drier and era of dinosaurs”结构错误，应为“much drier periods during the era of dinosaurs”。

× Well, I would definitely do it if if I got the chance of it because it is a great opportunity for me to broaden my horizon, which is an important way to learn more about the world and people.

✓ Well, I would definitely do it if I got the chance because it is a great opportunity for me to broaden my horizon, which is an important way to learn more about the world and people.

“the chance of it”表达不自然，应简化为“the chance”。

× Well, I would definitely do it if if I got the chance of it because it is a great opportunity for me to broaden my horizon, which is an important way to learn more about the world and people.

✓ Well, I would definitely do it if I got the chance because it is a great opportunity for me to broaden my horizon, which is an important way to learn more about the world and people.

句中重复使用“if if”是错误，应删除一个“if”。