Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议用简单明了的句子描述天气状况，并避免语法错误。

예시: The weather in my city is mostly sunny, but sometimes it rains every day for a short period.

제안: 表达有语法错误，句子不够流畅。建议使用正确的语法结构，简洁表达喜好并给出具体原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I sweat easily in hot weather, and I don't like feeling sweaty. Also, I enjoy wearing warm clothes.

제안: 回答内容具体，但表达不够连贯，句子结构有误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，注意语法和表达完整。

예시: I prefer dry weather because my clothes dry quickly. In wet weather, clothes left on the balcony can develop a bad smell because they don't dry properly.

제안: 表达不够自然，时态和语法错误较多。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达习惯并用连接词增强逻辑。

예시: I usually check the weather forecast at least once a day because the weather in my city changes quickly. For example, it can be sunny in the morning and rainy in the afternoon.

제안: 回答内容模糊且语法错误严重，缺乏具体信息。建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子并提供具体例子。

예시: Climate change has caused extreme temperatures in my city. Summers are hotter than before, and winters can be very cold.

제안: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和口语填充词。建议减少口语填充词，使用正确语法表达愿望和原因。

예시: Of course, I would like to visit a cooler city because my hometown is very hot, and I prefer a place with lower temperatures.

× Citywide air of sunny far out of town, but they also have a period that running every day.

✓ The citywide air is sunny far out of town, but there is also a period that runs every day.

原句句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清晰。应补充动词并调整句子结构，使句子完整通顺。

× Me, I prefer cold weather because in hot weather I may be easily get sweat and I dislike the feeling about umm sweaty, but cold is that I can wear.

✓ I prefer cold weather because in hot weather I may easily get sweaty and I dislike the feeling of being sweaty, but in cold weather I can wear comfortable clothes.

原句中“Me, I”用法不当，应直接用“I”。“may be easily get sweat”结构错误，应为“may easily get sweaty”。“feeling about umm sweaty”表达不准确，应为“feeling of being sweaty”。

× Actually I prefer dry weather because my clothes can easily get dry and in wet weather my clothes would have bad smell if I put it on the balcony for too long. And you can't dry.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather because my clothes can easily get dry, and in wet weather my clothes would have a bad smell if I put them on the balcony for too long. And you can't dry them.

“put it on the balcony”中“it”指代不明确，应改为复数“them”指代“clothes”。“And you can't dry.”句子不完整，应补充宾语“them”。

× I thought checking the weather forecast at least once a day because in my city weather I easily changed, maybe it just sunny in the morning and it was suddenly turned rainy in the afternoon. So I prefer check frequently.

✓ I check the weather forecast at least once a day because the weather in my city changes easily; maybe it is just sunny in the morning and suddenly turns rainy in the afternoon. So I prefer to check frequently.

“I thought checking”时态错误，应为现在时“I check”。“weather I easily changed”主谓不一致，应为“weather changes easily”。“it was suddenly turned rainy”时态和语态错误，应为“suddenly turns rainy”。“prefer check”缺少不定式“to”。

× Set lights to extreme temperature. Umm, just like the weather in my city. In the highest temperature in summer or higher than positives and also the coldest.

✓ The weather in my city has extreme temperatures, like very high temperatures in summer and very low temperatures in winter.

原句“Set lights to extreme temperature”表达不清，词语搭配错误。应使用“extreme temperatures”描述气温极端。

× Of course, uh, I would like to visit a cooler place where the city I stay have higher temperature and I feel too hot, so I would, uh, prefer to go to a place that has lower temperature.

✓ Of course, I would like to visit a cooler place because the city where I stay has a higher temperature and I feel too hot, so I would prefer to go to a place that has a lower temperature.

“where the city I stay have higher temperature”中“city”是单数，谓语应为“has”。“where the city I stay”表达不自然，应为“the city where I stay”。