Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. For example, use 'I live in a city near the sea, and the weather is quite mild. Summers are not too hot, and winters are not very cold, so I feel quite content living here. However, the rain can be a bit troublesome sometimes.'

예시: I live in a city near the sea, and the weather is quite mild. Summers are not too hot, and winters are not very cold, so I feel quite content living here. However, the rain can be a bit troublesome sometimes.

제안: Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Avoid confusing phrases and try to express your opinion directly. For example, say 'It's a difficult question because I miss winter during summer and miss summer during winter. So, I try to enjoy the weather I have at the moment.'

예시: It's a difficult question because I miss winter during summer and miss summer during winter. So, I try to enjoy the weather I have at the moment.

제안: Improve clarity by using correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Explain your reasons clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, 'I definitely prefer wet weather because dry weather worsens my skin condition and makes it uncomfortable to breathe.'

예시: I definitely prefer wet weather because dry weather worsens my skin condition and makes it uncomfortable to breathe.

제안: Use correct articles and verb forms, and make your sentences more natural. For example, 'I often check the weather forecast in the morning to decide whether I need to take an umbrella or wear a coat. It helps me prepare for the day.'

예시: I often check the weather forecast in the morning to decide whether I need to take an umbrella or wear a coat. It helps me prepare for the day.

제안: Use correct grammar and provide more specific details. For example, 'I think climate change has had very negative effects because humans are destroying the Earth, and we must take responsibility. Many animals are losing their habitats due to our activities.'

예시: I think climate change has had very negative effects because humans are destroying the Earth, and we must take responsibility. Many animals are losing their habitats due to our activities.

제안: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity. For example, 'Definitely, I would like to visit a city with snow because I live near the equator where it is warm and never snows. I want to experience a snowy city and see what it's like.'

예시: Definitely, I would like to visit a city with snow because I live near the equator where it is warm and never snows. I want to experience a snowy city and see what it's like.

× there's weather is very cozy

✓ the weather is very cozy

The phrase 'there's weather is' is incorrect because 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' and should not be followed by another verb 'is'. The correct form is 'the weather is' to describe the weather directly.

× the winter are not really cold

✓ the winter is not really cold

The subject 'winter' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of plural 'are' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× when I during the summer I always missing the winter

✓ when I am during the summer I always miss the winter

The preposition 'during' is incorrectly used with 'I'. It should be 'when I am in the summer' or simply 'in summer'. Also, 'missing' should be in the base form 'miss' after 'I always'.

× when I during the winter somehow I were missing the summer

✓ when I am during the winter somehow I miss the summer

Similar to the previous sentence, 'during' is incorrectly used with 'I'. Also, 'were missing' is incorrect; it should be 'miss' to match the subject and tense.

× I just perform the weather I don't during that

✓ I just prefer the weather I am not in during that time

The phrase 'perform the weather' is incorrect; likely intended 'prefer'. Also, 'I don't during that' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I am not in during that time' to express preference for weather not experienced.

× I will try to like the weather I'm doing now

✓ I will try to like the weather I'm experiencing now

The phrase 'like the weather I'm doing now' is incorrect; 'doing' is not used with 'weather'. The correct verb is 'experiencing' to describe the current weather.

× I have a certain answer for that question

✓ I have a definite answer to that question

The phrase 'a certain answer' is less natural; 'a definite answer' is more appropriate. Also, the correct preposition is 'to' rather than 'for' when referring to an answer to a question.

× Was the wet weather because I can't stand the dry weather

✓ It was the wet weather because I can't stand the dry weather

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' at the beginning. Also, 'was' should be 'It was' to form a complete sentence.

× It will make my skinny worse

✓ It will make my skin worse

The word 'skinny' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'skin', which is singular and uncountable.

× my breathing was so hard to stand through my

✓ my breathing is so hard to endure

The sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'Was' should be 'is' to match the present tense context. 'Stand through my' is incorrect; 'endure' or 'breathe through' is more appropriate.

× I often check the weather forecast in the morning because I need to use it to decide if I have to borrow a umbrella or what should I get a coat to outside

✓ I often check the weather forecast in the morning because I need to decide if I have to borrow an umbrella or if I should get a coat to go outside

The phrase 'borrow a umbrella' should be 'borrow an umbrella' due to vowel sound. 'What should I get a coat to outside' is incorrect; it should be 'if I should get a coat to go outside'.

× I always have to wearing a coat

✓ I always have to wear a coat

The verb 'have to' should be followed by the base form 'wear', not the '-ing' form 'wearing'.

× I think the climate change are very badly

✓ I think climate change is very bad

'Climate change' is a singular uncountable noun, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'badly' is an adverb; the adjective 'bad' is correct here.

× that was the human destroying the earth and we have to responsible for that

✓ that is humans destroying the earth and we have to be responsible for that

'That was the human' is incorrect; 'that is humans' is correct. Also, 'have to responsible' should be 'have to be responsible'.

× a lot of animals are losing their home because of our activity

✓ a lot of animals are losing their homes because of our activities

'Home' should be plural 'homes' to match 'a lot of animals'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to indicate multiple actions.

× where it's a snow

✓ where there is snow

The phrase 'where it's a snow' is incorrect. The correct form is 'where there is snow' to indicate the presence of snow.

× the weather in there are so warmth

✓ the weather there is so warm

'Weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'Warmth' is a noun; the adjective 'warm' is correct here.