Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えが少し不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。例えば、「I can go outside long time」は「I can't stay outside for a long time」のように表現すべきです。また、情報が限定的で具体性に欠けています。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、天気の特徴を具体的に述べ、文法を正しく使いましょう。

예시: I live in Nagoya City, where the weather is usually sunny. However, during summer, it gets extremely hot, so I can't stay outside for a long time.

제안: 文法の誤りが目立ち、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I prefer cold weather than to hot weather」は「I prefer cold weather to hot weather」が正しいです。また、理由の説明が不明瞭なので、具体的で論理的な説明を心がけましょう。

예시: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in cold weather, I can enjoy wearing fashionable clothes with many layers, which is not comfortable in hot weather.

제안: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が不明瞭です。文法的にも誤りがあり、内容が不十分です。答えは完全な文で、理由を明確に述べ、論理的に繋げることが重要です。

예시: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because wet weather makes it uncomfortable to play outside, while dry weather is more pleasant for outdoor activities.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「apologists」は不適切な単語です。習慣や頻度を明確に述べ、正しい語彙を使いましょう。

예시: I often check the weather forecast before going outside, especially to avoid getting caught in the rain.

제안: 内容が繰り返されており、文法的な誤りもあります。「Inkley's CO2」は意味不明です。具体的な影響を明確に述べ、正しい語彙と文法を使いましょう。

예시: I think climate change has many negative effects on our lives, such as melting ice caps and increased levels of CO2 in the atmosphere.

제안: 答えが断片的で不完全です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させる必要があります。より自然で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: No, I don't like visiting places with different climates because I find it difficult to adapt to new weather conditions.

× I live in Nagoya City and Nagoya city's weather is almost always sunny, but in summer it is so hot that I can go outside long time.

✓ I live in Nagoya City and Nagoya City's weather is almost always sunny, but in summer it is so hot that I cannot stay outside for a long time.

The phrase 'go outside long time' is incorrect because 'long time' needs a preposition 'for' and the verb 'go' is not appropriate here. The correct expression is 'stay outside for a long time'. Also, 'Nagoya city's' should be 'Nagoya City's' with a capital 'C' for the proper noun.

× I prefer cold weather than to hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than to'. The correct structure is 'prefer A to B'.

× When it is cold we can enjoy fashion, but in hot weather on weekend where many layers so.

✓ When it is cold, we can enjoy fashion, but on weekends in hot weather, we wear fewer layers.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Where many layers so' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure and word order.

× I prefer dry weather to. I prefer dry weather to wet weather because in wet weather it is uncomfortable to play outside but. I.

✓ I prefer dry weather too. I prefer dry weather to wet weather because it is uncomfortable to play outside in wet weather.

The original sentence has incomplete thoughts and incorrect pronoun use. 'to.' should be 'too' meaning 'also'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often check with our forecast before I go outside if I don't watch weather forecast.

✓ I often check the weather forecast before I go outside. If I don't check the weather forecast, we might have to wait because of the rain, so I must watch it carefully.

The phrase 'check with our forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather forecast'. Also, 'watch weather forecast' is incorrect; 'check' or 'look at' is better. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× We might wait because of the raining, so I must watch with apologists.

✓ We might have to wait because of the rain, so I must watch carefully.

'Because of the raining' is incorrect; 'because of the rain' is correct. 'Watch with apologists' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'watch carefully'. The sentence is corrected for proper noun and verb usage.

× I think it affects our lives. So I think it affects our lives so much. It cause a lot of negative effects and like melting ice or. Inkley's CO2.

✓ I think it affects our lives a lot. It causes many negative effects like melting ice and increasing CO2 levels.

'It cause' should be 'it causes' to agree with the singular subject. 'Inkley's CO2' is unclear; likely meant 'increasing CO2'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't like, no, I don't like visiting other climate regions because I'm not good at. Adapting other climate so I don't go to.

✓ No, I don't like visiting other climate regions because I'm not good at adapting to different climates, so I don't go to them.

The phrase 'adapting other climate' is incorrect; it should be 'adapting to different climates'. Also, 'I don't go to' needs an object; 'them' is added. The sentence is corrected for preposition and sentence completeness.