Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и не совсем естественен. Постарайтесь формулировать предложения более чётко и избегать лишних слов, чтобы звучать более уверенно и понятно.

예시: I live in a place where the weather is usually cold, and I really enjoy the snowy winters because the white snow looks beautiful.

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неясные выражения. Старайтесь использовать правильные времена и более чётко выражать свои мысли, чтобы ответ был понятен и логичен.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it motivates me to stay active. When I walk outside in the cold, I feel like going home and relaxing, which makes me appreciate my home more.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Попробуйте использовать более разнообразную лексику и избегать повторов, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным.

예시: I prefer wet weather because I find dry streets dull. I especially enjoy snowy days as they make the environment look fresh and lively.

제안: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Старайтесь использовать правильные времена и более точные слова, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и связным.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work. It helps me plan my day, like deciding what to wear or whether to take an umbrella if it might rain.

제안: Ответ содержит много непонятных и неправильных слов, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и точные выражения, а также структурировать ответ логично с поддержкой конкретными примерами.

예시: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events like hurricanes and floods, which damage both nature and people's lives. For example, melting glaciers in Brazil have raised sea levels, affecting many coastal areas.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь выражать свои мысли более чётко и использовать правильную структуру предложений.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new environments and cultures.

× I love to live in a cold weather because I love so much snow with the with the white snow, yeah.

✓ I love living in cold weather because I love so much snow, especially the white snow, yeah.

The verb 'love' when followed by another verb should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' to indicate enjoyment of an activity. 'Love to live' is less natural than 'love living' in this context.

× I love to live in a cold weather because I love so much snow with the with the white snow, yeah.

✓ I love living in cold weather because I love so much snow, especially the white snow, yeah.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Using 'a cold weather' is incorrect; it should be 'cold weather'.

× So I prefer cold because it give me some depression and motivation to live.

✓ So I prefer cold because it gives me some depression and motivation to live.

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'gives' to agree in number and person.

× And so when I when I walk in a cold weather, I was so want to go my home.

✓ And so when I walk in cold weather, I really want to go home.

The sentence mixes present tense 'walk' with past tense 'was'. Consistency in tense is important; here, present tense is appropriate. Also, 'was so want' is incorrect; 'really want' is correct.

× So when I when I walk in a cold weather, I was so want to go my home.

✓ And so when I walk in cold weather, I really want to go home.

The phrase 'go my home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go home' without 'my'.

× So that's why cold weather gonna help you to love your home.

✓ So that's why cold weather is going to help you love your home.

'Gonna' is informal and incorrect in formal speech; it should be 'is going to'. Also, 'help you to love' can be simplified to 'help you love'.

× So I prefer cold because it give me some depression and motivation to live.

✓ So I prefer cold because it gives me some depression and motivation to live.

The verb 'give' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'gives'.

× I prefer wet weather because I don't love to see dry weather with the dry streets.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I don't like to see dry weather with dry streets.

The phrase 'love to see' is awkward here; 'like to see' is more appropriate. Also, 'the dry streets' should be 'dry streets' without the article.

× I prefer 100 times wet with the with the snow, Yeah.

✓ I prefer wet weather with snow a hundred times more, yeah.

The phrase '100 times wet with the with the snow' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be rephrased for clarity and correct article usage.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving my work.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving work.

The phrase 'leaving my work' is awkward; 'leaving work' is more natural. The tense is correct.

× I find it helped me to plan my day especially to decide what to wear or ways to carry an umbrella for example if it was rain.

✓ I find it helps me to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or how to carry an umbrella, for example if it is raining.

The verb tense should be present to match 'I find'. 'Helped' should be 'helps'. Also, 'if it was rain' should be 'if it is raining'.

× Experts that I make sure to take pro appropriate precaution.

✓ I make sure to take appropriate precautions.

The phrase 'Experts that' is unclear and likely a mistake. 'Pro appropriate precaution' is incorrect; it should be 'appropriate precautions' without 'pro'.

× In recent years, climate change has been frowned defects on internment and soft delivers.

✓ In recent years, climate change has caused defects in the environment and soft deliverers.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Frowned defects on internment and soft delivers' is incorrect; it should be rephrased for clarity and correct word choice.

× We have witnessed small fractions and seven ways such as hurricanes, floods and roads, which have caused significant damage to aestheticism and humanity dimensions.

✓ We have witnessed small fractions and severe events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have caused significant damage to ecosystems and human populations.

The original sentence contains many incorrect words and prepositions. 'Seven ways' likely means 'severe events', 'roads' should be 'droughts', 'aestheticism' should be 'ecosystems', and 'humanity dimensions' should be 'human populations'.

× A little single budget in Brazil have a laid off the melting of water escapes and glitters, contributing to sea levels and terrestrial commodities.

✓ A small glacier in Brazil has accelerated the melting of water masses and glaciers, contributing to rising sea levels and affecting terrestrial communities.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Little single budget' is incorrect; likely meant 'small glacier'. 'Laid off' is incorrect; 'accelerated' or 'caused' is appropriate. 'Water escapes and glitters' is unclear; 'water masses and glaciers' is better. 'Terrestrial commodities' should be 'terrestrial communities'.

× Moreover, climate change has distributed.

✓ Moreover, climate change has had widespread effects.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Distributed' is not appropriate here; a complete thought is needed.

× Yes, because I love to see what is that other countries and what is that other countries with. So my myself, yeah.

✓ Yes, because I love to see what other countries are like and what they have. So, myself, yeah.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'What is that other countries' should be 'what other countries are like'. 'My myself' is incorrect; 'myself' alone is sufficient.