Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“the weather in there is really very wide”不自然，应改为“the weather varies a lot”。同时，注意句子结构，避免冗长和重复。

예시: I live in a small city where the weather changes frequently. Sometimes it's sunny, while other times it's rainy and cloudy, so I always prepare accordingly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，如“make me make me feel sad”重复，应简化表达。建议用更清晰的句子表达喜好和原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because hot sun hurts my eyes and makes me feel uncomfortable. Cold weather suits me better as I feel more relaxed and energetic.

제안: 回答中出现了词汇错误，如“white weather”应为“wet weather”，且句子不完整，表达混乱。建议注意词汇准确性和句子完整性。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel comfortable and energetic. Wet weather is unpleasant as it makes my clothes damp and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“journey journey”，且表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并更清晰地说明习惯。

예시: I usually don't check the weather forecast because it's mostly sunny in my city. But if I plan to travel to another city, I check it occasionally to prepare properly.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: In recent years, summers have become longer and hotter, while winters are shorter. I believe this is due to global climate change.

제안: 回答中有重复和未完成的句子，如“I can I can”和“a new a new process For me it's”。建议注意句子完整性和流畅性。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it allows me to experience new scenery and enjoy different weather conditions.

× the weather in there is really very wide

✓ the weather there is really very changeable

这里的 'in there' 用法不正确，应该直接用 'there' 来表示地点。此外，'wide' 用来形容天气不合适，应该用 'changeable' 来表达天气多变。

× it's really need to protect from the sunshine

✓ it really needs protection from the sunshine

'need' 后面不能直接跟动词原形，应该用被动结构 'needs protection' 来表达需要被保护。

× I really can't bear the sunny especially it can hurt my eyes

✓ I really can't bear the sun, especially because it can hurt my eyes

'the sunny' 用法错误，应该用名词 'the sun'。此外，句子缺少连接词 'because' 来连接原因。

× make me make me feel sad so I can't

✓ make me feel sad, so I can't

重复使用 'make me' 是多余的，应删除重复部分。

× it make me feel comfortable

✓ it makes me feel comfortable

主语是第三人称单数 'it'，动词 'make' 应该加 's' 变为 'makes'。

× my clothes feels really so white and I will feel comfortable and it

✓ my clothes feel really dirty and I will not feel comfortable in it

'clothes' 是复数，动词应为 'feel'。'white' 应为 'dirty'（根据语境推测），句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× I really need to prepare an umbrella or wear special clothes to protect the rainy day

✓ I really need to prepare an umbrella or wear special clothes to protect myself on rainy days

'protect the rainy day' 用法错误，应该是保护自己免受雨天影响，故用 'protect myself on rainy days'。

× I might check it occasionally to be sure my journey journey is

✓ I might check it occasionally to be sure my journey is safe

句子末尾不完整，缺少形容词或补语，补充 'safe' 使句子完整。

× I think that in recent years is very hot recently

✓ I think that in recent years it has been very hot

句子缺少主语 'it'，时态应为现在完成时 'has been' 来表示最近一段时间的状态。

× the climate's effect on of the hot of the global

✓ the effect of global warming on the climate

表达混乱，正确表达应为 'the effect of global warming on the climate'，调整词序和介词使用。

× I can I can visit the different sceneries and I can have a new a new process For me it's

✓ I can visit different sceneries and have a new experience. For me, it's

重复 'I can' 多余，'a new process' 应为 'a new experience'，句子末尾不完整，需补充。