Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I'm living」より「I live」が自然です。また、「It makes me very cold and lonely」は意味が曖昧で、具体的な感情や理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。さらに、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより流暢になります。

예시: The weather in my city is quite cold. I live in France now, but I used to live in Japan, where the weather is hotter and more comfortable. Because of the cold here, I sometimes feel lonely during winter.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。「many lay there inside the outer」や「I make」は意味が伝わりにくいので、具体的で正しい表現を使いましょう。また、理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I can wear many layers of clothing to keep warm. In contrast, during hot summers, I have to wear light clothes, which I find less comfortable.

제안: 「drive weather」は「dry weather」の誤りです。また、「on the IT is very humid」は意味が不明瞭です。理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい表現を使いましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話すことも大切です。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather is often very humid, which makes me feel uncomfortable and stressed. Therefore, I like the dry climate typical of many European countries.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「forget bringing」より「forget to bring」が正しいです。また、「worried about the way to go back to home」は不自然なので、「worried about how to get home」などに修正しましょう。

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast. Because of that, I often forget to bring an umbrella when I go to university, and sometimes I worry about how to get home if it starts raining.

제안: 回答は内容的に良いですが、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。「1 country」は「one country」、「all country」は「all countries」が正しいです。また、「reduce air conditioning」は意味が曖昧なので、「reduce the use of air conditioning」など具体的に表現しましょう。

예시: I believe climate change is too serious for one country to solve alone. Therefore, all countries need to work together to find the best solutions, such as reducing the use of air conditioning to lower energy consumption.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、「it is like strange for me」は不自然です。「experience different climates」や「it's interesting to me」などの表現を使いましょう。また、文をつなげる接続詞を使い、より流暢に話すことが望ましいです。

예시: Yes, I would like to experience different climates in other cities because I find it interesting. Also, I can try wearing local clothes, which makes me very excited.

× I'm living in France but I used to live in Japan.

✓ I live in France but I used to live in Japan.

The present continuous tense 'I'm living' is incorrectly used for a permanent situation. For permanent states or facts, the simple present tense 'I live' is appropriate.

× Japanese weather is hotter than this and it's more comfortable than France.

✓ The Japanese weather is hotter than here and it's more comfortable than in France.

'Japanese weather' should be preceded by the definite article 'The' to specify the weather of Japan. Also, 'than this' is unclear; 'than here' is more natural. 'Than France' should be 'than in France' to correctly compare locations.

× I prefer cold weather because when I feel too cold I can wear many lay there inside the outer.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when I feel too cold I can wear many layers inside my outerwear.

The phrase 'many lay there inside the outer' is incorrect. 'Many layers' is the correct plural noun, and 'inside my outerwear' correctly uses the preposition 'inside' with the noun 'outerwear'.

× But in summer I can't avoid wearing lightwear so I make.

✓ But in summer I can't avoid wearing light clothes, so I do.

'Lightwear' is not a standard word; 'light clothes' is appropriate. The phrase 'so I make' is incomplete and unclear; 'so I do' is a better response to imply acceptance.

× I prefer drive weather because umm when it is wet weather on the IT is very humid and it makes me feel stressful.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when it is wet, it is very humid and it makes me feel stressed.

'Drive weather' is a typo; it should be 'dry weather'. 'Feel stressful' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel stressed' to describe a person's feeling.

× I like dry weather like European weather.

✓ I like dry weather like the weather in Europe.

'Like European weather' is vague; 'like the weather in Europe' is clearer and uses the correct preposition 'in' for locations.

× I often forget bringing my umbrella when I go to university, so I sometimes worried about the way to, uh, go back to home when it starts raining.

✓ I often forget to bring my umbrella when I go to university, so I sometimes worry about the way to go back home when it starts raining.

'Forget bringing' should be 'forget to bring' as the correct verb pattern. 'Worried' should be 'worry' to match the present tense. 'Go back to home' should be 'go back home' without 'to'.

× I think that problem is too serious to be solved by 1 country.

✓ I think that problem is too serious to be solved by one country.

The numeral '1' should be written as the word 'one' in formal writing.

× So I think all country uh have to combine and look for the best solutions.

✓ So I think all countries have to combine and look for the best solutions.

'All country' should be plural 'all countries' to agree with the plural verb 'have'.

× One of them is uh, reduce air conditioning.

✓ One of them is to reduce air conditioning.

The verb 'reduce' needs the infinitive form 'to reduce' to function correctly after 'is'.

× Yes, I would like to feel different climates in other cities because it is like strange for me.

✓ Yes, I would like to experience different climates in other cities because it feels strange to me.

'Feel different climates' is unnatural; 'experience different climates' is better. 'It is like strange for me' is incorrect; 'it feels strange to me' is the correct expression.

× So I can try to wear umm, their country's clothes.

✓ So I can try to wear their country's clothes.

No grammatical error here; the sentence is correct.

× So it makes me very excited.

✓ So it makes me very excited.

The sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved stylistically to 'So it excites me a lot.' However, as per instructions, only grammar errors are corrected.