Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为完整，表达了居住地天气的特点，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: The weather in Kunming is moderate all year round, which is why it's called the Spring City. The temperature is neither too hot nor too cold, making it a very pleasant place to live.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子重复且未完成。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并完整表达观点。

예시: I prefer hot weather because I am sensitive to the cold and often catch a cold in winter. Therefore, I enjoy living in warm countries like Thailand.

제안: 回答未完成，表达不连贯，缺少完整的句子和逻辑连接。建议注意回答的完整性和连贯性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I don't like either dry or wet weather. Dry weather makes my skin feel tight and uncomfortable, which affects my skincare routine. On the other hand, wet weather often makes everything feel sticky and unpleasant.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（Hobbit应为habit），句子未完成且表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和语法，确保句子完整且表达明确。

예시: Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every day. I usually use an app on my phone to decide what to wear and plan my activities accordingly.

제안: 回答表达不完整，句子结构不够清晰，缺少连贯的连接词。建议完善句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅具体。

예시: Climate change has seriously affected both humans and ecosystems. For example, frequent extreme weather events like floods and droughts harm agriculture and people's livelihoods.

제안: 回答表达了个人喜好，但句子结构简单且有语法错误（can makes应为can make）。建议注意语法准确性，并尝试丰富表达。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. I enjoy hot weather and living near the sea because it allows me to comfortably enjoy outdoor activities.

× The weather is always moderate where I live because I live in the city called Kunming, where it had got another name called Spring City.

✓ The weather is always moderate where I live because I live in the city called Kunming, which has another name called Spring City.

这里使用过去完成时态“had got”不合适，描述的是现在的事实，应该用现在完成时或一般现在时。建议用“which has”来表达“有另一个名字”。

× I prefer hot weather because I'm quite sensitive to cold temperature and easily to catch a cold during winter.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I'm quite sensitive to cold temperatures and easily catch a cold during winter.

“cold temperature”应使用复数形式“cold temperatures”，且“easily to catch”中“to”多余，正确用法是“easily catch”。

× So I prefer hot weather and I prefer living in the hot country such as Thailand because.

✓ So I prefer hot weather and I prefer living in hot countries such as Thailand.

句子末尾“because”后没有内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉“because”。

× I don't like them both because dry weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I don't like either of them because dry weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

“them both”用法不正确，表达否定时应使用“either of them”。

× Especially very dry weather can make my skin feel tight and uncomfortable, which is not good for my skin care routine.

✓ Especially, very dry weather can make my skin feel tight and uncomfortable, which is not good for my skincare routine.

“skin care”作为一个词应写作“skincare”，且句子结构无大问题，只需调整词形。

× On the other hand, wet weather often makes anything feel sticky and.

✓ On the other hand, wet weather often makes everything feel sticky.

句子末尾“and”后无内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉“and”并用“everything”替代“anything”更合适。

× Yes, I have a Hobbit of checking weather forecast every single day.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every single day.

“Hobbit”是错误拼写，应为“habit”，且“weather forecast”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I heavily rely on the app on my phone where I usually check the weather forecast to decide what to wear and plan my day accordingly for.

✓ I heavily rely on the app on my phone where I usually check the weather forecast to decide what to wear and plan my day accordingly.

句尾“for”多余，应去掉。

× Climate change has had a serious negative effect on both human beings and ecosystem because the frequent extreme weathers like floods or droughts which harm for both agriculture and human livelihood in addition.

✓ Climate change has had a serious negative effect on both human beings and ecosystems because of frequent extreme weather events like floods or droughts, which harm both agriculture and human livelihood.

“ecosystem”应为复数“ecosystems”，“frequent extreme weathers”应改为“frequent extreme weather events”，“harm for”错误，应为“harm”，句尾“in addition”多余。

× Yeah, I really enjoy the hot weather all year round and I really enjoy living near the sea, which can makes me enjoy outdoor activities comfortably.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy the hot weather all year round and I really enjoy living near the sea, which can make me enjoy outdoor activities comfortably.

“which”指代单数，谓语动词应用原形“make”，而非“makes”。