Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors, such as 'heavy vein' which seems incorrect. Try to be more precise and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

예시: The weather in Ukraine is generally stable, with temperatures usually ranging from 20 to 30 degrees Celsius. However, sometimes we experience heavy rainfalls, especially during certain seasons. Overall, the climate is quite moderate and predictable.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes and redundancy, such as 'on my point, in my opinion'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use comparative forms correctly, e.g., 'hotter' instead of 'more hotter'.

예시: I definitely prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable. Unfortunately, due to climate change, summers in Ukraine have become hotter than usual, making that season less enjoyable for me.

제안: Your answer is quite good and shows personal opinion with supporting details. However, try to avoid repeating words like 'heavy rain' twice in one sentence. Use linking words such as 'although' or 'however' to improve coherence. Also, keep sentences concise and clear.

예시: I prefer dry weather; however, I enjoy rainy days as well because my favourite season is when there is heavy rain. I love the cosy atmosphere of sitting at home while it pours outside.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and filler words like 'umm'. Use present simple tense consistently ('I check' instead of 'I checked'). Also, try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: As a student, I check the weather forecast every morning to decide what to wear. This helps me avoid any awkward situations if the weather changes unexpectedly during the day.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and vague expressions like 'a lot bad effects'. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'I'm not an expert' in this context. Use linking words to improve flow.

예시: Climate change has caused several negative effects recently. For example, global temperatures have been rising, which affects weather patterns worldwide.

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has some grammatical errors such as 'one of my biggest dream is'. Try to use correct singular/plural forms and avoid vague phrases like 'somewhere'. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and keep sentences concise.

예시: Absolutely. One of my biggest dreams is to visit every country in the world, which means experiencing different climates. Although some climates might be challenging, I am willing to adapt and enjoy the experience.

× The only changes can be when there is a heavy vein and, you know, probably can be heavy rains, but mostly there is like temperature from 20 to 30.

✓ The only changes can be when there is a heavy rain, and, you know, there can probably be heavy rains, but mostly the temperature is from 20 to 30.

The phrase 'there is a heavy vein' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a heavy rain' to correctly use 'there is' with a singular noun. Also, 'probably can be heavy rains' is awkward; 'there can probably be heavy rains' is the correct structure for expressing possibility with 'there be'. Lastly, 'mostly there is like temperature from 20 to 30' is incorrect; it should be 'mostly the temperature is from 20 to 30' to correctly use 'there is' and the verb 'is' with the subject 'temperature'.

× the weather becomes more hotter than usual

✓ the weather becomes hotter than usual

The phrase 'more hotter' is incorrect because 'hotter' is already the comparative form of 'hot'. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant. The correct form is simply 'hotter'.

× the summer is the worst season in the year on my point, in my opinion.

✓ the summer is the worst season of the year, in my opinion.

The phrase 'on my point' is incorrect and unnecessary. The correct preposition to express opinion is 'in my opinion'. Also, 'season in the year' should be 'season of the year' to correctly indicate belonging.

× mostly my favorite season of the year is when there is a lot of heavy rains

✓ mostly my favorite season of the year is when there is a lot of heavy rain

The noun 'rain' is uncountable, so 'rains' is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'a lot of heavy rain'. Also, 'there is' is correctly used with the uncountable noun 'rain'.

× I love the atmosphere of the day when I'm sitting home and outside is the heavy rain.

✓ I love the atmosphere of the day when I'm sitting at home and outside there is heavy rain.

The phrase 'sitting home' is missing the preposition 'at'. Also, 'outside is the heavy rain' is incorrect; it should be 'outside there is heavy rain' to correctly use 'there is' with uncountable noun 'rain'.

× I checked the weather forecast every morning so I can choose the outfit of the day

✓ I check the weather forecast every morning so I can choose the outfit of the day

The phrase 'I checked' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present simple 'I check' is appropriate.

× I think that there is a lot bad effects because of the climate change

✓ I think that there are a lot of bad effects because of climate change

The phrase 'a lot bad effects' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of bad effects'. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' because 'effects' is plural.

× the weather and the temperature in the world are increasing.

✓ the weather and the temperature in the world are increasing.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'weather and temperature' are plural subjects with plural verb 'are'.

× one of my biggest dream is to visit every country in the world

✓ one of my biggest dreams is to visit every country in the world

The phrase 'one of my biggest dream' is incorrect because 'one of' requires a plural noun. It should be 'one of my biggest dreams'.

× I will face different climate there and somewhere.

✓ I will face different climates there and somewhere else.

The noun 'climate' should be plural 'climates' when referring to different types. Also, 'somewhere' is vague; 'somewhere else' is clearer.