Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What's the weather like where you live?
수험생
I live in Shanghai and to be honest I quite dislike the weather here. When it's in summer, the weather is usually humid and burning which makes me sweat all the day and I just hate that feeling, it's very uncomfortable. Well, when it's in winter the weather soon tend to better cold one. It's just discourage me from going out home.
시험관
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
수험생
Uh, if I have to pick one, I would prefer hot, hot weather, uh, because though it can be humid and uh, burning hot weather, uh, cold one just pretty much more inconvenience. For example, you have to wear very sick clothes before you go out and my, my, my joints just feel rigid, which.
시험관
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
수험생
I would definitely prefer dry weather. Just imagine living and wet weather where it's raining all the all the year and the the year is so humid and the disgusting disgusting smile of something though Moody. It's just I cannot tear when it's the wet weather.
시험관
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
수험생
Yes, yes, I usually check the weather forecast every night before I go to bed. This helps help me to prepare for the next day. For example, I won't forgot to bring an umbrella with me or I won't wear unsuitable clothes. As for the, for the temperature, uh, it just makes uh, it's just help me prepare my activity better and avoid unexpected.
시험관
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
수험생
And my personal feeling is that climate change brings much more extreme weather condition. For example, we have much more extreme hot summer and extreme cold winter. And it's just have significant impact on our daily life, our agriculture and even our economy.
시험관
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
수험생
Yes, of course, just like I have mentioned before, I hate the weather here in Shanghai. It can be extremely hot in winter, uh, hot in summer and extreme cold in winter. By contrast, I have visited Australia before and I just enjoy the climate here where it's dry and warm all the year. Uh, makes me refresh and feel comfortable.
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총점
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和冗余，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，注意时态和单复数的正确使用。
예시: I live in Shanghai, where the weather is quite uncomfortable. Summers are hot and humid, making me sweat all day. Winters are cold, which discourages me from going outside.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有较多口头语和重复，表达不流畅，句子不完整。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: If I have to choose, I prefer hot weather because, although it can be humid, cold weather is more inconvenient. For example, you need to wear many layers, and my joints feel stiff.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，词汇使用不当。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用准确词汇表达观点。
예시: I definitely prefer dry weather. Living in a place where it rains all year and is very humid is unpleasant for me.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较完整，但存在重复和语法错误。建议减少重复，注意动词时态和单复数，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every night before bed. This helps me prepare for the next day, like remembering to bring an umbrella or dressing appropriately for the temperature.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构简单，部分语法错误。建议使用更多连接词，丰富句型，提升表达的连贯性和准确性。
예시: In my opinion, climate change has caused more extreme weather conditions. For example, we experience hotter summers and colder winters, which significantly affect our daily lives, agriculture, and economy.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用正确的时态和连接词，使表达更自然。
예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have been to Australia, where the weather is dry and warm all year, which I find refreshing and comfortable.
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