Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'who miss' nên là 'humidity'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng tính hiệu quả. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: The weather in Vietnam is generally hot and humid, especially during the summer months from May to October when it often rains.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'go to bed' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, có thể bạn muốn nói 'go out' hoặc 'go swimming'. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

예시: I prefer hot weather because it lets me enjoy special vacations. For example, this summer I went to the beach with my friends and family.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh đưa ra thông tin không liên quan. Hãy sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I prefer dry weather because my clothes dry faster. Also, dry weather makes it safer to drive, reducing traffic accidents.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng trong câu trả lời. Ví dụ, 'I checked' nên là 'I check' để nói thói quen hiện tại. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể thêm liên kết để mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually check the weather forecast on television every day. However, when I am busy, I often check it on my cell phone.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. 'Best effects' nên là 'bad effects' hoặc 'negative effects'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

예시: Climate change has many negative effects on the environment and people's health. It causes diseases such as lung cancer and heart disease.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ, 'It's increasing of disease' nên là 'It increases the risk of diseases'.

예시: I don't like visiting cities with different climates because it can harm my health and increase the risk of diseases.

× Where I live in Vietnam, the weather is hot and who miss is usually rain in the summer.

✓ Where I live in Vietnam, the weather is hot and what we usually have is rain in the summer.

The original sentence uses 'who miss' incorrectly. It should be 'what we usually have' to correctly refer to the usual weather condition. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and demonstratives.

× From May through October the temperature is usually high.

✓ From May through October, the temperatures are usually high.

The word 'temperature' should be plural 'temperatures' because it refers to varying temperatures over a period. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy special vacation.

✓ I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy special vacations.

The word 'vacation' should be plural 'vacations' or preceded by an article like 'a special vacation' to be grammatically correct. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× In this summer, I can go to bed, go to the beach with my friend, friend and family.

✓ This summer, I can go to bed, go to the beach with my friends and family.

The word 'friend' is repeated and should be plural 'friends' to indicate more than one friend. Also, 'in this summer' is better as 'this summer'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I prefer the right weather because in the summer my clothes dry faster.

✓ I prefer the dry weather because in the summer my clothes dry faster.

The word 'right' is incorrect here; it should be 'dry' to describe the weather type. This is an incorrect use of prepositions or word choice.

× Beside what question can call more traffic accident on the street?

✓ Besides, what question can cause more traffic accidents on the street?

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Beside' should be 'Besides,' and 'call' should be 'cause'. Also, 'traffic accident' should be plural 'traffic accidents'. This is a sentence structure error.

× I checked the weather forecast on the television every day.

✓ I check the weather forecast on the television every day.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate instead of past tense 'checked'. This is a past tense issue.

× When I am too busy, I often watch the weather forecast on my cell phone.

✓ When I am too busy, I often watch the weather forecast on my cell phone.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× The climate change has many best effects on the environment and pupil health.

✓ Climate change has many negative effects on the environment and public health.

'Many best effects' is incorrect; it should be 'many negative effects'. Also, 'pupil health' is incorrect; it should be 'public health'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and word choice.

× It's called many disease for people such as lung cancer, heart disease.

✓ It causes many diseases in people such as lung cancer and heart disease.

'It's called' is incorrect; 'It causes' is correct. 'Many disease' should be 'many diseases'. Also, 'for people' should be 'in people'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb choice.

× I don't like visiting other cities that have different climates because it can cause harmful effects on my health.

✓ I don't like visiting other cities that have different climates because they can cause harmful effects on my health.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'cities' which is plural, so it should be 'they'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× It's increasing of disease.

✓ It increases diseases.

The phrase 'It's increasing of disease' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'It increases diseases.' This is a sentence structure error.