Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể dùng từ đồng nghĩa hoặc cụm từ thay thế để tránh lặp lại từ "weather" nhiều lần.

예시: Currently, the weather varies depending on the season. Since it's autumn now, the temperature is generally chilly with light drizzle almost daily. I find this kind of climate slightly cold but ideal for wearing cozy clothes and enjoying warm beverages.

제안: Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm lý do tại sao bạn thích thời tiết lạnh và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, tránh dùng cụm từ không tự nhiên như "for hours on end without working".

예시: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to relax comfortably under a thick blanket. Moreover, the chilly atmosphere helps me sleep better and feel more refreshed the next day.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn đã khá đầy đủ và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên sử dụng thêm các liên từ như "however" hoặc "in contrast" để làm rõ sự so sánh giữa hai loại thời tiết và tránh lặp từ.

예시: I don't particularly favor either dry or wet weather. Wet weather often attracts many insects, which makes me feel uncomfortable. However, the dry season tends to be very hot and sometimes suffers from water shortages. Therefore, I generally prefer mild weather.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi như "before my planning". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được làm rõ hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để tăng tính mạch lạc.

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast myself. Instead, I ask my grandfather about the weather for the next day because he has a lot of experience and can predict it quite accurately. I tend to do this almost every evening before planning my activities for the following day.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "The car may change" và "flashlights". Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách hiệu quả.

예시: Climate change in recent years has been quite alarming. It often causes natural disasters such as floods and flash floods, which damage people's property and affect their health.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một lỗi lặp từ "I would like I would definitely like". Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I have never visited cities with different climates from where I live in Vietnam, but if I had the chance, I would definitely like to try it. For instance, visiting a cooler city during the hot summer would be very pleasant and comfortable. I believe experiencing different weather can be both exciting and refreshing.

× I find this kind of weather a little bit cold and perfect for weathering cozy clothes and enjoying warm drinks.

✓ I find this kind of weather a little bit cold and perfect for wearing cozy clothes and enjoying warm drinks.

The verb 'weathering' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form is 'wearing' when referring to putting on clothes. 'Weathering' means enduring or surviving something, which does not fit the context.

× I would say cold weather would be better because I like to lay in bed wearing the thick blanket and have a good sleep for hours on end without working.

✓ I would say cold weather would be better because I like to lie in bed wearing a thick blanket and have a good sleep for hours on end without working.

The verb 'lay' is often confused with 'lie'. 'Lie' means to recline or be in a resting position, which is correct here. 'Lay' requires a direct object and means to put something down. Also, 'the thick blanket' should be 'a thick blanket' because it is not a specific blanket previously mentioned.

× I tend to do this almost every evening before my planning my activities for the following day.

✓ I tend to do this almost every evening before planning my activities for the following day.

The phrase 'before my planning' is incorrect because 'planning' here functions as a gerund and does not need the possessive pronoun 'my'. Removing 'my' corrects the prepositional phrase.

× The car may change in recent years.

✓ The climate may have changed in recent years.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a typo ('car' instead of 'climate'). Also, 'may change' is present/future tense, but 'in recent years' requires present perfect tense 'may have changed' to indicate an action over a recent period.

× It all always brings natural disasters such as floods or flashlights, which damage human property and health.

✓ It always brings natural disasters such as floods or flash floods, which damage human property and health.

The word 'flashlights' is incorrect; the intended term is 'flash floods'. Also, 'all always' is redundant; 'always' alone suffices.

× I have never visited other cities with different climates from where I live in Vietnam, but if I had the chance I would like I would definitely like to try it.

✓ I have never visited other cities with different climates from where I live in Vietnam, but if I had the chance, I would definitely like to try it.

The phrase 'I would like I would definitely like' is repetitive and incorrect. Removing the extra 'I would like' corrects the sentence. Also, a comma after 'chance' improves clarity.