Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は全体的に自然ですが、"windows are not very cold"の表現は不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より具体的で正確な表現を使い、冗長な部分を避けると良いでしょう。例えば、"winters are not very cold"のように言い換え、文の流れをスムーズにするために接続詞を活用してください。

예시: The weather where I live is quite mild throughout the year. Winters are not very cold, and it rarely snows, so we don't have to worry about harsh winter conditions. Moreover, summers are warm but not too hot, which makes it very comfortable.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"rather cold, hot mild weather"は矛盾しているため、どちらかに絞って明確に表現しましょう。また、"I am not get accustomed to"は文法的に誤りなので、正しい形に直してください。接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開することも重要です。

예시: I prefer mild weather because I was brought up in an area without severe winters. We seldom have snow in winter, so I am not accustomed to very cold weather.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りが多いです。"I prefer well whether"は意味不明なので、正しい表現に直しましょう。また、文を短くし、接続詞を使って論理的に説明してください。具体的な理由や経験を加えると良いです。

예시: I prefer wet weather because I was brought up in a place where summers are hot and wet. I am not used to living in dry areas or places with dry seasons.

제안: 文法の誤りがいくつかあります。例えば、"I don't have habit"は"I don't have the habit"または"I don't usually"に直すべきです。"commute my car"は不自然なので、"commute by car"に修正してください。接続詞を使い、文を整理するとより自然になります。

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast before going out because I commute to work by car every day, so the weather doesn't affect me much. However, I try to check the forecast when I have outdoor activities planned.

제안: 回答が途中で途切れており、意味が不明瞭です。文法的な誤りも多いので、まずは簡潔で明確な文を作ることを心がけてください。具体的な影響や経験を述べ、接続詞で文をつなげると良いでしょう。

예시: I think recent climate change has affected our daily lives. For example, I have to think carefully about when to change my seasonal clothes because the weather has become unpredictable. Also, I have experienced unusually severe cold spells recently.

제안: 回答が不完全で文法的にも誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、具体的な例を挙げて説明してください。文を短くし、接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開しましょう。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. For example, I am interested in countries that have dry seasons or experience heavy snowfall, as these are very different from my hometown.

× For example, windows are not very cold and it rarely snows, so we don't have to worry about harsh winter conditions.

✓ For example, winters are not very cold and it rarely snows, so we don't have to worry about harsh winter conditions.

The word 'windows' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'winters' (plural), referring to the season. 'Windows' refers to glass openings in buildings, which does not fit the context.

× I prefer rather cold, hot mild weather because I was brought up in the area where there were no severe winter.

✓ I prefer rather cold, hot, mild weather because I was brought up in an area where there were no severe winters.

The phrase 'no severe winter' should be plural 'no severe winters' because it refers to multiple winter seasons. Also, 'the area' is better as 'an area' for general reference.

× We have seldom snow in winter so I am not get accustomed to.

✓ We seldom have snow in winter, so I am not accustomed to it.

The verb phrase 'have seldom snow' is incorrect; 'seldom have snow' is correct. Also, 'I am not get accustomed to' is grammatically wrong; it should be 'I am not accustomed to it' or 'I do not get accustomed to it.' The phrase 'accustomed to' requires a noun or pronoun object.

× I prefer well whether I was brought up in the area where it is, it is hot, wet in summer, I am not accustomed to living in dry area or the area has dry seasons.

✓ I prefer wet weather. I was brought up in an area where it is hot and wet in summer. I am not accustomed to living in a dry area or an area that has dry seasons.

The original sentence is confusing and has incorrect prepositions and article usage. 'Well whether' should be 'wet weather.' Also, 'dry area' needs an article 'a.' The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't have habit of checking weather forecast before going out because I commute my car to work place every day so I don't need to care about the weather forecast.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast before going out because I commute by car to my workplace every day, so I don't need to worry about the weather forecast.

The phrase 'have habit' requires the definite article 'the.' 'Commute my car' is incorrect; it should be 'commute by car.' 'Work place' should be one word 'workplace.' 'Care about' is better replaced with 'worry about' in this context.

× But when I have a outdoor activities I try to check the weather.

✓ But when I have outdoor activities, I try to check the weather.

'A outdoor activities' is incorrect because 'activities' is plural and does not need 'a.' Also, a comma is added for clarity.

× I think the recent change in climate has had an impact on our daily schedule I I am considering how to change my the how to change seasonal clothes and I have experienced a severe cold and.

✓ I think the recent changes in climate have had an impact on our daily schedule. I am considering how to change my seasonal clothes, and I have experienced severe cold weather.

The original sentence is run-on and incomplete. It repeats 'I' and has unclear phrases like 'my the how to change.' The correction splits the sentence for clarity, corrects verb agreement, and completes the thought.

× I'm interested in the places where the where it is different climate, where from where I live. Like the country has dry season and the country has scored in every.

✓ I'm interested in places where the climate is different from where I live, such as countries that have dry seasons and countries that have snow every year.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. 'Where the where it is different climate' is incorrect. 'Scored in every' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'snowed in every year.' The correction clarifies and completes the sentence meaningfully.