Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid sentence fragments like 'Because spring is just beginning.' Instead, combine ideas to make your response more natural and fluent. Also, watch for subject-verb agreement and plural forms, e.g., 'flowers are blooming' instead of 'flower blooming'.

예시: At the moment, the weather is a bit cool and dry because spring is just beginning. There are many flowers blooming around, which makes the atmosphere really pleasant. I quite enjoy this kind of weather as it's comfortable and refreshing.

제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but try to use more precise vocabulary and correct minor grammar errors, such as 'more refresh' should be 'more refreshed'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas; instead, use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I tend to sweat easily and find hot, humid conditions quite uncomfortable. In cold weather, I feel more refreshed and can stay active without feeling sticky or tired. Therefore, overall, I enjoy the cool weather.

제안: Be careful with word choice; 'humanity' should be 'humidity'. Also, try to vary your vocabulary and sentence structures to sound more natural. Adding linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' can improve coherence.

예시: I prefer dry weather because I don't like the sticky feeling that comes with humidity. When it's wet or humid, I often feel uncomfortable and find it harder to focus. Therefore, dry conditions make it easier for me to enjoy outdoor activities and feel more refreshed.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but watch for small grammar mistakes such as 'whether if will be' which should be 'whether it will be'. Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise for better fluency.

예시: I usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially before activities like laundry or traveling. For example, if I plan to do laundry, I check whether it will be sunny or rainy to decide if I can hang my clothes outside.

제안: There are several grammar and vocabulary errors here. Use correct verb forms: 'temperatures have been rising steadily' and 'more frequent heat waves'. Also, plural forms like 'sea levels' and 'coastal areas' are needed. Try to use linking words like 'which has led to' to connect ideas clearly.

예시: I think in most countries, temperatures have been rising steadily in recent years, which has led to more frequent heat waves. Additionally, sea levels are increasing due to melting ice caps, causing flooding in coastal areas.

제안: Be careful with word choice and grammar: 'others countries' should be 'other countries', and 'different ways' should be 'different climates'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'staying staying' and correct 'it's feel' to 'it feels'. Try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I would love to visit other countries with different climates from where I live. For example, I found Taiwan quite humid and wet, so I really enjoy staying in places with a dry climate because it feels more comfortable and refreshing.

× Because spring is just beginning.

✓ Spring is just beginning.

The sentence 'Because spring is just beginning.' is a sentence fragment as it starts with a subordinating conjunction 'Because' but lacks a main clause. To correct this, remove 'Because' to form a complete sentence.

× There are a lot of flower blooming around which make the atmosphere really apparent.

✓ There are a lot of flowers blooming around which make the atmosphere really apparent.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'a lot of', which refers to multiple items. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× There are a lot of flower blooming around which make the atmosphere really apparent.

✓ There are a lot of flowers blooming around which makes the atmosphere really apparent.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'a lot of flowers' (plural), but the verb 'make' should agree with the singular noun 'atmosphere'. Since 'atmosphere' is singular, the verb should be 'makes'.

× I find hard and humid conditions quite uncomfortable.

✓ I find hard and humid conditions quite uncomfortable.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× In cold weather I feel more refresh and can stay active without feeling sticky or tired.

✓ In cold weather I feel more refreshed and can stay active without feeling sticky or tired.

The adjective 'refresh' is incorrect here; the correct past participle adjective form is 'refreshed' to describe the feeling.

× I prefer dry weather because I don't like the sticky feeling that comes with humanity.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like the sticky feeling that comes with humidity.

The word 'humanity' (meaning all human beings) is incorrect here; the intended word is 'humidity', which refers to moisture in the air.

× For instance, if I plan to do laundry, I check whether if will be sunny or rainy to decide if I can hang my clothes outside.

✓ For instance, if I plan to do laundry, I check whether it will be sunny or rainy to decide if I can hang my clothes outside.

The pronoun 'if' is incorrectly used; the correct pronoun here is 'it' to refer to the weather condition.

× I think in most countries temperatures has been raise rising steadily in recent years which has led to more frequently heat wave.

✓ I think in most countries temperatures have been rising steadily in recent years which has led to more frequent heat waves.

The plural subject 'temperatures' requires the plural verb 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'raise' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'rising'. 'More frequently heat wave' should be 'more frequent heat waves' to use the correct adjective and plural noun.

× Additionally, sea level are increasing due to melting ice caps causing flooding in coastal area.

✓ Additionally, sea levels are increasing due to melting ice caps causing flooding in coastal areas.

'Sea level' should be plural 'sea levels' to match the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'coastal area' should be plural 'coastal areas' to be consistent with the context.

× Yes, I would love to visit others countries with different ways from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other countries with different climates from where I live.

The word 'others' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'other' as an adjective modifying 'countries'. Also, 'different ways' is unclear; 'different climates' fits the context better.

× For example, I found Taiwan quite humid and wet, so I really enjoy staying staying in a place with a dry climate because it's feel more comfortable and refreshing.

✓ For example, I found Taiwan quite humid and wet, so I really enjoy staying in a place with a dry climate because it feels more comfortable and refreshing.

The word 'staying' is repeated twice by mistake. Also, 'it's feel' is incorrect; it should be 'it feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.