Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "busy" để mô tả thời tiết và chú ý đến thì động từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I live in Hana City, where the weather today is quite chilly, which is typical for this time of year. Usually, the temperature drops during the winter months, making it perfect to wear warm clothes and enjoy a hot drink.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "have angry" và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tập trung vào việc trình bày ý kiến một cách logic và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: In my opinion, I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable. Hot weather often makes me feel tired and irritable, while cold weather allows me to enjoy outdoor activities more easily.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích thời tiết khô và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for outdoor activities. Also, dry weather usually means less chance of rain, so I can plan my day without worrying about getting wet.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp như "take the weather forecast" nên là "check the weather forecast" và một số lỗi nhỏ khác. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for school because it helps me plan my day better. For example, if the forecast predicts rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or wear a raincoat to stay dry. I often use a weather app on my phone, which is very convenient.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rất ngắn và không rõ ràng. Bạn cần phát triển ý tưởng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đúng để trình bày quan điểm về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

예시: I think climate change is mainly caused by human activities that harm the Earth. As a result, we see more extreme weather events, rising temperatures, and negative effects on wildlife and the environment.

제안: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi như "the American is" và nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, có liên kết giữa các ý.

예시: Yes, of course. In the future, I want to travel all over the world. For example, I would like to visit America because it has snowy weather, and I also want to go to the Sahara Desert to experience the hot climate.

× Usually the temperature drop during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoy hot drink this kind of weather.

✓ Usually the temperature drops during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoying hot drinks in this kind of weather.

The subject 'temperature' is singular, so the verb should be 'drops' (third person singular). Also, 'enjoy' should be 'enjoying' to match the gerund form after 'making it perfect for'. 'Hot drink' should be plural 'hot drinks' to match the general sense, and 'in this kind of weather' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Usually the temperature drop during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoy hot drink this kind of weather.

✓ Usually the temperature drops during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoying hot drinks in this kind of weather.

The verb 'drop' must agree with the singular subject 'temperature', so it should be 'drops'.

× Usually the temperature drop during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoy hot drink this kind of weather.

✓ Usually the temperature drops during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoying hot drinks in this kind of weather.

After 'making it perfect for', the verbs should be in the gerund form '-ing' to indicate ongoing actions or activities, so 'enjoy' should be 'enjoying'.

× Usually the temperature drop during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoy hot drink this kind of weather.

✓ Usually the temperature drops during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoying hot drinks in this kind of weather.

'Hot drink' should be plural 'hot drinks' because it refers to drinks in general, not a single drink.

× Usually the temperature drop during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoy hot drink this kind of weather.

✓ Usually the temperature drops during the winter months, making it perfect for wearing warm clothes and enjoying hot drinks in this kind of weather.

The phrase should be 'in this kind of weather' to correctly express the condition or environment.

× Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather, but the hot weather I feel, uh, always hot and have angry, but the cold weather I can feel convenient to I go in the road that I.

✓ Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather. Hot weather always makes me feel hot and angry, but cold weather feels comfortable when I go outside.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be divided into clear sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and logical structure. 'Have angry' is incorrect; it should be 'feel angry'. 'Convenient to I go in the road that I' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'feels comfortable when I go outside' to convey the intended meaning.

× Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather, but the hot weather I feel, uh, always hot and have angry, but the cold weather I can feel convenient to I go in the road that I.

✓ Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather. Hot weather always makes me feel hot and angry, but cold weather feels comfortable when I go outside.

The pronouns are misused and misplaced, causing confusion. Correct pronouns and their placement are necessary for clarity.

× Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather, but the hot weather I feel, uh, always hot and have angry, but the cold weather I can feel convenient to I go in the road that I.

✓ Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather. Hot weather always makes me feel hot and angry, but cold weather feels comfortable when I go outside.

'Have angry' is incorrect; 'angry' is an adjective and should be used with 'feel'. 'Convenient' is an adjective but used incorrectly; 'comfortable' fits better to describe feeling in cold weather.

× Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather, but the hot weather I feel, uh, always hot and have angry, but the cold weather I can feel convenient to I go in the road that I.

✓ Uh, in my opinion, I like cold weather. Hot weather always makes me feel hot and angry, but cold weather feels comfortable when I go outside.

The sentence has issues with singular/plural forms and verb agreement that need correction for clarity.

× Uh, I think many people, they will like the dry weather.

✓ Uh, I think many people will like dry weather.

'The dry weather' is incorrect here because 'dry weather' is a general concept and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'they' is unnecessary and redundant after 'many people'.

× Uh, I think many people, they will like the dry weather.

✓ Uh, I think many people will like dry weather.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'many people' and should be omitted for grammatical correctness.

× Uh, I think many people, they will like the dry weather.

✓ Uh, I think many people will like dry weather.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'dry weather' when speaking generally.

× Yes, I usually take the weather forecast every morning before I leave for school because it help me plan my day better.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for school because it helps me plan my day better.

'Take the weather forecast' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'check'. Also, 'it help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I usually take the weather forecast every morning before I leave for school because it help me plan my day better.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for school because it helps me plan my day better.

The verb 'help' must be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× For instance, is the forecast predicts rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or wear a raincoat to stay dry.

✓ For instance, if the forecast predicts rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or wear a raincoat to stay dry.

The phrase 'is the forecast predicts' is incorrect; it should be 'if the forecast predicts' to introduce a conditional clause.

× I often use the weather app on my phone to stay updated which is very convenient.

✓ I often use the weather app on my phone to stay updated, which is very convenient.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly separate the relative clause.

× The first, I think the climate change happens by the effect, uh, from attitude of people about the earth.

✓ First, I think climate change happens because of people's attitudes towards the Earth.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'The first' should be 'First'. 'Happens by the effect from attitude of people about the earth' is incorrect; it should be 'happens because of people's attitudes towards the Earth' for clarity and correctness.

× The first, I think the climate change happens by the effect, uh, from attitude of people about the earth.

✓ First, I think climate change happens because of people's attitudes towards the Earth.

The prepositions 'by the effect from' are incorrect; 'because of' and 'towards' are the correct prepositions here.

× Yes, of course in the future I want to go around all over the world.

✓ Yes, of course, in the future I want to travel all over the world.

'Go around all over the world' is awkward; 'travel all over the world' is more natural. Also, commas are needed after 'Yes' and 'of course'.

× Yes, of course in the future I want to go around all over the world.

✓ Yes, of course, in the future I want to travel all over the world.

A comma is needed after 'of course' to separate introductory phrases.

× I will go to the American is.

✓ I will go to America.

'American is' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'America'.

× I will go to the American is.

✓ I will go to America.

The definite article 'the' is not used before country names like 'America'.

× I know this have snowy weather.

✓ I know this place has snowy weather.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'This have' is incorrect; it should be 'this place has'.

× I know this have snowy weather.

✓ I know this place has snowy weather.

The verb 'have' must be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'this place'.

× I will go to Sahara because the hot weather.

✓ I will go to the Sahara because of the hot weather.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'of' after 'because' and the definite article 'the' before 'Sahara'.

× I will go to Sahara because the hot weather.

✓ I will go to the Sahara because of the hot weather.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Sahara' as it is a desert name.