Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서
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Part 1
시험관
What's the weather like where you live?
수험생
Well, the figure of Kuwait is completely different if I compare it with other countries. Mostly here the weather is remain hot and sunny and you cannot stay outside for more than 5 minutes and you need always air condition all the time. But right now in weather, the weather is quite quite I would say.
시험관
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
수험생
Will I prefer always a normal weather? Like I don't like more sunny and hot weather or neither I like, uh, the most cloudy, uh, weather or cold weather because I cannot tolerate both of them for me and normal weather is uh, completely, uh, acceptable where I can enjoy or I would say I, I can.
시험관
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
수험생
Well, as I already discussed, I prefer normal weather because if the weather is very dry, so it will definitely effects your mood or it is it will, you know, also effects your body. So yeah, wet weather is also not comfortable for me because I don't feel like doing work at that mood.
시험관
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
수험생
Well, honestly speaking, I never check, uh, the weather forecast because, uh, it's, uh, normally I would say I can predict the weather because when you're living in a place for a longer period of time so that you can easily predict the weather. And especially here in Kuwait, like most of the time it's sunny and, uh, you know, there's, you can only experience the 2.
시험관
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
수험생
The lyrics would say that there are a lot of effects of climate change in the recent year, For example, uh, uh, the weather is affecting people's life a lot because of the climate change, people are getting more diseases and they are, you know, uh, getting hospitalized most of the time. And people are not feeling well, maybe because they are not, uh, drinking water properly.
시험관
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
수험생
Well I would love to visit other countries or sites to check the weather like I have only right now I have only experienced the weather of only two countries. Like previously I was living in Pakistan where the weather was completely normal and moderate I would say. But here in Kuwait it's extremely hot. The you know the temperature is always above 4.
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Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
점수: 65.0제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'the figure of Kuwait' and 'in weather, the weather is quite quite'. Use clear topic sentences and support with specific details. For example, describe the typical weather and how it affects daily life.
예시: The weather in Kuwait is usually very hot and sunny, especially in summer, making it difficult to stay outside for long. However, currently, the weather is milder and more comfortable than usual.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why. Avoid filler words and hesitations. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
예시: I prefer moderate weather because I find both very hot and very cold weather uncomfortable. Moderate temperatures allow me to enjoy outdoor activities without feeling too hot or cold.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid hesitations and improve sentence flow using linking words.
예시: I prefer moderate weather rather than very dry or wet conditions. Dry weather can negatively affect my mood and health, while wet weather makes me feel lazy and less productive.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer has many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to answer directly and clearly. Explain your reason with specific details and avoid unnecessary fillers.
예시: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I have lived in Kuwait for a long time and can predict the weather based on experience. Since it is mostly sunny here, I find forecasts less necessary.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and specific examples. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases like 'The lyrics would say'. Provide clear reasons and examples of climate change effects.
예시: Climate change has caused more extreme weather, which affects people's health. For instance, higher temperatures can lead to heat-related illnesses, and some people may suffer more because they don't drink enough water.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and hesitations.
예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have lived in Pakistan where the weather was moderate, unlike Kuwait where it is very hot most of the year.
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