Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai về số nhiều (seasons). Bạn nên trình bày rõ ràng hơn về các mùa và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I live in Hanoi, which has four seasons. Summer is hot and wet, while winter is cold and dry. I especially like autumn and spring because the weather is mild and the air is fresh.

제안: Bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to stay warm by wearing extra clothes. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable no matter what I wear.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đa dạng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến sự hòa hợp giữa chủ ngữ và động từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more convenient to go outside. Wet weather often makes everything gloomy and messy, so I enjoy the clear sky and sunshine more.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi sai về giới từ và chia động từ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually check the weather forecast on my smartphone every morning. This helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella or wear warmer clothes, especially on rainy days.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để liệt kê các ví dụ một cách mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, climate change has had significant effects recently. Global warming causes more extreme weather events such as droughts, forest fires, storms, and floods, which lead to serious global damage.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác.

예시: To be honest, I don't like visiting cities with very different climates because I have sensitive skin and I often get sick when the weather changes drastically.

× I live in Hanoi and the weather here have four season.

✓ I live in Hanoi and the weather here has four seasons.

The subject 'weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' (third person singular). Also, 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because there are four of them.

× autumn and spring are my favorite because the weather in mind and the air.

✓ Autumn and spring are my favorite because of the weather in my mind and the air.

The phrase 'the weather in mind' is unclear and missing a preposition. It should be 'because of the weather in my mind and the air' to clarify the reason.

× The air is fresh.

✓ The air is fresh.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather because in cold weather is easy to warm up by wearing extra clothes, while in hot weather, no matter how little I wear, I still feel unforgettable and it's reason why I prefer cold water. Uh, sorry, cold weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather because in cold weather it is easy to warm up by wearing extra clothes, while in hot weather, no matter how little I wear, I still feel uncomfortable and that's the reason why I prefer cold weather.

Missing subject 'it' in 'in cold weather it is easy'. 'Unforgettable' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'uncomfortable'. Also, 'it's reason' should be 'that's the reason'. 'Cold water' was a slip; corrected to 'cold weather'.

× I prefer dry weather because when I have to go out, dry weather is more convenient, convenient to get around than wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when I have to go out, dry weather is more convenient to get around than wet weather.

The word 'convenient' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the repetition improves clarity.

× And wet weather usually make everything to be gloomy and messy.

✓ And wet weather usually makes everything gloomy and messy.

Subject-verb agreement: 'wet weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes'. Also, 'make everything to be' is incorrect; 'makes everything gloomy' is correct.

× But I much prefer cleaner sky and sunshine.

✓ But I much prefer a cleaner sky and sunshine.

The noun 'sky' is singular and countable here, so it needs the article 'a' before it.

× I usually check the weather up in my smartphone in every morning because I want to know exactly whether in my day if I should bring an umbrella or or wear something warmer.

✓ I usually check the weather on my smartphone every morning because I want to know exactly about my day if I should bring an umbrella or wear something warmer.

The phrase 'check the weather up' is incorrect; 'check the weather on' is correct. 'In every morning' should be 'every morning'. 'Whether in my day' is unclear; 'about my day' is better.

× It have me plan my day better especially when the rainy.

✓ It helps me plan my day better especially when it is rainy.

'It have' is incorrect; should be 'It helps'. 'The rainy' is incorrect; should be 'it is rainy' or 'the rain'.

× Now today, climate rain made big impacts to the weather.

✓ Nowadays, climate change has made a big impact on the weather.

'Now today' is redundant; 'Nowadays' is better. 'Climate rain' is incorrect; should be 'climate change'. 'Made big impacts to' should be 'has made a big impact on'.

× Global warming makes the weather more extreme, like drought, forest fire, storm, flood.

✓ Global warming makes the weather more extreme, causing droughts, forest fires, storms, and floods.

List items should be plural to match the general meaning. Also, adding 'causing' clarifies the relationship.

× As a result, it leads to serious global damage.

✓ As a result, it leads to serious global damage.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× To be honest, I don't like to be this other city that that have two different climates from where I live because my skin is sensitive skin type and I also is easy to recount and I also easy to sickness when I visit to two different climate play.

✓ To be honest, I don't like to be in other cities that have different climates from where I live because my skin is sensitive, and I also easily get sick when I visit places with different climates.

'To be this other city' is incorrect; should be 'to be in other cities'. 'That that have' should be 'that have'. 'Sensitive skin type' should be 'sensitive'. 'I also is easy to recount' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'I also easily get sick'. 'Visit to two different climate play' is incorrect; corrected to 'visit places with different climates'.