Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然连贯的表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更紧凑。

예시: I live in northern China, where the weather changes significantly throughout the year. Summers are hot and humid, while winters are very cold. Therefore, I particularly enjoy spring and autumn because the weather is quite comfortable during these seasons.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误（a growing vegetables），建议注意冠词和名词单复数的搭配，同时可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer hot weather because it is ideal for growing vegetables and flowers, which makes the environment more lively and beautiful. Moreover, I find it easier to spend time outdoors when the weather is warm.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和表达不准确的问题，建议练习发音和表达的准确性，避免重复，同时丰富词汇表达。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is usually sunny, which makes me feel more energetic and happy. For instance, I enjoy going outside and doing outdoor activities without worrying about rain.

제안: 回答中句子结构不够连贯，且表达不够准确。建议使用连接词连接句子，并注意用词准确性，如“address appropriate”不合适。

예시: I check the weather forecast every day, not only before going to school but also before planning to go outside. This helps me dress appropriately and be prepared for any changes in the weather.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: In recent years, the climate has become warmer, which makes it difficult for some animals to survive. Many species are losing their habitats due to rising temperatures.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，建议注意形容词比较级的正确使用，避免重复，并使句子更简洁流畅。

예시: Absolutely. I live in northern China, so I would like to visit southern cities like Guangzhou. The weather there is warmer and more humid, which would be a great experience to enjoy a different environment and escape the harsh cold winter.

× I prefer hot weather because it's great for a growing vegetables and flowers which makes environment more lively and beautiful.

✓ I prefer hot weather because it's great for growing vegetables and flowers which make the environment more lively and beautiful.

这里'vegetables'是复数，前面不需要加不定冠词'a'。'makes'应改为'make'，因为主语是复数'flowers'。此外，'environment'前应加定冠词'the'。

× I enjoy going on going outside outside and doing outdoors activities when the weather is dry or without without worrying about the rain.

✓ I enjoy going outside and doing outdoor activities when the weather is dry without worrying about the rain.

'going on going outside outside'重复且错误，应简化为'going outside'。'outdoors activities'应为'adjective + noun'结构，正确为'outdoor activities'。'or without without'重复，应去掉'or'。

× I check out the weather forecast every day and not only before going to school but also I plan to go outside.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day, not only before going to school but also before I plan to go outside.

'check out'在此语境中不合适，改为'check'更准确。'not only... but also'结构后应保持平行，故补充'before'使结构完整。

× In recent years, the climate is becoming more and more warm or which makes it very difficult for us, some animals to survive because some species lose is loose because some species are losing their habitats due to the rising temperatures.

✓ In recent years, the climate has been becoming warmer and warmer, which makes it very difficult for us and some animals to survive because some species are losing their habitats due to the rising temperatures.

'is becoming more and more warm'应改为'has been becoming warmer and warmer'以符合现在完成进行时。'or'多余，应去掉。'lose is loose'错误，应改为'are losing'。句子结构需调整以表达清晰。

× Absolutely, I live in the north of China so I want to visit the South cities of the China such as Guangzhou.

✓ Absolutely, I live in the north of China so I want to visit the southern cities of China such as Guangzhou.

'South cities'应为形容词形式'southern cities'。'the China'错误，国家名前一般不加定冠词。

× The weather there is there is more warmer and more humid.

✓ The weather there is warmer and more humid.

'more warmer'是比较级重复，'warmer'本身已含比较意义，去掉'more'。

× It would be a good experience to enjoy the different environment and escape the harsh cold winter.

✓ It would be a good experience to enjoy the different environment and escape from the harsh cold winter.

'escape'后面通常接介词'from'表示逃离某物，缺少'from'不符合习惯用法。