Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'become humid' and 'air feels damped'. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: I live in Sutram, where the weather is usually humid and the air feels damp, which can be a bit uncomfortable at times. For example, it often rains heavily during the summer months.

제안: Your answer starts well but ends abruptly and is incomplete. Also, some phrases like 'support me to do' are unnatural. Try to complete your thoughts and use more natural expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy many outdoor activities. For example, I can swim in the pool or eat ice cream to cool down. However, cold weather is better for activities like skiing.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors like 'unconvenient' and 'make the clothes difficult to dry'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather can be uncomfortable and inconvenient, especially in Sichuan province. For instance, during wet winters, clothes take a long time to dry.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes like 'in tomorrow' and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct prepositions and complete your sentences clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially when I have important plans the next day. For example, if I have a date with a friend or my boyfriend, I check the weather to prepare accordingly.

제안: Your answer is brief and contains grammatical errors like 'is exceed over 40'. Try to provide more specific details and use correct grammar. Also, explain the effects more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: In recent years, climate change has caused many effects. For example, summers have become increasingly hotter. In Citroen province, temperatures often exceed 40 degrees Celsius.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors like 'a big fan for travelling' and 'I often went'. Try to complete your thoughts, use correct verb tenses, and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Absolutely. I enjoy traveling long distances, especially during summer holidays. For example, I often go to northern China to escape the hot weather in Sichuan, which helps me stay comfortable.

× To be honest, I live in Sutram where the weather always become humid and the air feels damped, which will make sometimes a little bit uncomfortable.

✓ To be honest, I live in Sutram where the weather always becomes humid and the air feels damp, which sometimes makes it a little bit uncomfortable.

The verb 'become' should be in the third person singular present tense 'becomes' to agree with the singular subject 'weather'. 'Damped' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'damp'. The phrase 'will make sometimes a little bit uncomfortable' is awkward; it should be 'sometimes makes it a little bit uncomfortable' to correctly express the idea.

× For example, the wet weather usually make the clothes difficult to dry, especially in the winter.

✓ For example, the wet weather usually makes the clothes difficult to dry, especially in the winter.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'wet weather'.

× I often check the weather forecast almost every day, especially when I have some essential activities in tomorrow.

✓ I often check the weather forecast almost every day, especially when I have some essential activities tomorrow.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'tomorrow'. 'Tomorrow' is an adverb of time and does not require a preposition.

× Since I'm a big fan for travelling for a long distance, especially during the summer holidays, I often went to the north of China to avoid the hot weather in Sichuan.

✓ Since I'm a big fan of travelling long distances, especially during the summer holidays, I often go to the north of China to avoid the hot weather in Sichuan.

The phrase 'fan for' should be 'fan of'. 'Went' is past tense but the adverb 'often' suggests habitual action, so present tense 'go' is appropriate. 'For a long distance' should be 'long distances' to express generality.