Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng thì không chính xác (ví dụ: 'had' nên là 'has'). Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và sự thật hiển nhiên. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp từ để tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I live in Vietnam, which has a tropical climate. The weather is usually hot and humid, especially in summer, while winters are warm and rarely cold. For instance, temperatures often rise above 30°C during the hottest month.

제안: Bạn nên tránh trả lời bằng 'Yes' cho câu hỏi lựa chọn và cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'make' nên là 'makes'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I prefer warm weather because I can't stand the cold. My favorite seasons are spring and summer since the weather is pleasant, and I enjoy going to the beach. Warm weather makes outdoor activities much more enjoyable for me.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'price gain' không rõ nghĩa, 'motorized' sai từ, câu không mạch lạc). Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I don't like dry weather because it makes my skin feel uncomfortable and itchy. I prefer wet weather since the humidity helps keep my skin moisturized. For example, during the rainy season in Vietnam, my skin feels better and more comfortable.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngắt quãng như 'uh' và nói rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được tổ chức mạch lạc hơn với liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy và tự nhiên.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast in the morning and the night before, especially if I have special plans like going on a picnic or traveling. I find it very useful to know the weather conditions in advance.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'headed to' nên là 'led to', 'soil drought' không đúng). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

예시: Nowadays, rapid industrial development has made climate change more serious, leading to many natural disasters such as droughts and floods. For example, in Vietnam, prolonged dry seasons have affected agriculture and water supply, causing difficulties for many people.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Honestly, I'm a bit hesitant to visit cities with very different climates because I have sensitive skin and a weak immune system. For example, when I travel to colder places, I often catch a cold and feel uncomfortable.

× I live in Vietnam, which had a tropical climate, so the weather is really hot and humid, especially in the summer, while the winters are warm and rarely cold.

✓ I live in Vietnam, which has a tropical climate, so the weather is really hot and humid, especially in the summer, while the winters are warm and rarely cold.

The sentence describes a current fact about Vietnam's climate, so the present tense 'has' should be used instead of the past tense 'had'. Using past tense here incorrectly suggests the climate is no longer tropical.

× Warm weather make the outdoor activity much more enjoyable for me.

✓ Warm weather makes outdoor activities much more enjoyable for me.

The subject 'Warm weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. Also, 'outdoor activity' should be plural 'outdoor activities' to refer generally to activities.

× Uh, because I have price gain? I don't like dry weather very much, saying it made my skin feel uncomfortable and itchy.

✓ Uh, because I have dry skin? I don't like dry weather very much, saying it makes my skin feel uncomfortable and itchy.

The phrase 'price gain' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'dry skin'. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to match the present tense context. The pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'dry weather'.

× I prefer wet weather because the humidity help keep my skin motorized.

✓ I prefer wet weather because the humidity helps keep my skin moisturized.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'humidity'. Also, 'motorized' is incorrect; the correct word is 'moisturized' meaning to keep skin hydrated.

× For example, during the rainy season in Vietnam, asking feel made better and feel more comfortable overall.

✓ For example, during the rainy season in Vietnam, my skin feels better and more comfortable overall.

The phrase 'asking feel made better' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'my skin feels better' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× I usually uh, check the weather forecast in the morning and on the night before, especially when I have a special plan like going on a picnic or traveling.

✓ I usually, uh, check the weather forecast in the morning and the night before, especially when I have a special plan like going on a picnic or traveling.

The phrase 'on the night before' is incorrect; it should be 'the night before' without 'on' to correctly express the time reference.

× And I find it very useful to know the weather, uh, condition and event.

✓ And I find it very useful to know the weather conditions and events.

'Condition' and 'event' should be plural 'conditions' and 'events' to refer generally to various weather conditions and events.

× As in this day and day, because of their rapid development of industry, climate change has become more serious with headed to many natural disasters such as soil drought and floods.

✓ Nowadays, because of the rapid development of industry, climate change has become more serious, leading to many natural disasters such as droughts and floods.

The original sentence is awkward and contains errors. 'As in this day and day' is incorrect; 'Nowadays' is better. 'Their rapid development' is unclear; 'the rapid development' is correct. 'With headed to' is incorrect; 'leading to' is appropriate. 'Soil drought' should be 'droughts'.

× For example, in Vietnam prolonged that dry season had affected agriculture and water supply, causing difficulty for many people.

✓ For example, in Vietnam, the prolonged dry season has affected agriculture and water supply, causing difficulties for many people.

'That dry season' should be 'the dry season'. 'Had affected' should be 'has affected' to match the recent time frame. 'Difficulty' should be plural 'difficulties' to refer to various problems.

× Honestly, I'm a bit hesitant to visit city with very different climate because I have a sensitive skin and a weak immune system.

✓ Honestly, I'm a bit hesitant to visit cities with very different climates because I have sensitive skin and a weak immune system.

'City' should be plural 'cities' to match 'very different climates'. 'A sensitive skin' is incorrect; 'sensitive skin' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× For example, I travel to UH. When I travel to market colders and hotel place I often catch a cold and feel uncomfortable.

✓ For example, when I travel to colder markets and hotel places, I often catch a cold and feel uncomfortable.

'Travel to UH' is unclear and likely a typo. 'Market colders' should be 'colder markets'. 'Hotel place' should be 'hotel places'. Prepositions and word order are corrected for clarity.