Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and structuring your sentences clearly. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'In my country, we have two main seasons: the sunny season from May to November, and the rainy season from November to January.'

예시: In my country, we experience two main seasons. The sunny season lasts from May to November, while the rainy season occurs from November to January.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural expressions. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and avoid repeating 'I want'.

예시: It depends on my plans. If I want to rest, I prefer cold or rainy weather because it helps me relax. However, if I have outdoor activities, I prefer hot weather so I can be productive during my holiday.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a complete sentence with clear reasons and avoid filler words like 'umm'. For example, 'I prefer dry weather because it allows me to be more productive outdoors.'

예시: I prefer dry weather because it helps me be more productive, especially when I have tasks to do outside.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'for example' properly. For instance, 'Yes, I usually check the weather forecast, especially when there is a typhoon, so my family can prepare. For example, I also check it before outdoor activities.'

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast, especially when a typhoon is expected, so my family can prepare. For example, I also check it before planning any outdoor activities.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give specific effects with clear explanations and avoid filler words. For example, 'Climate change has caused typhoons to occur unpredictably throughout the year, which affects people's safety and daily life.'

예시: Climate change has led to unpredictable typhoons occurring throughout the year, which negatively impacts people's safety and disrupts daily activities.

제안: Your answer has some unclear parts and repetition. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. For example, 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with cold winters because we don't have winter in my country. I want to experience the snow and different activities.'

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with cold winters because we don't have winter in my country. I want to experience snow and enjoy different winter activities.

× Where in my country we have the sunny and rainy season.

✓ In my country, we have the sunny and rainy seasons.

The preposition 'Where' is incorrectly used at the beginning of the sentence. The correct preposition to indicate location or context here is 'In'. Also, 'season' should be plural as there are two seasons mentioned.

× So sunny season we have with uh around May to November.

✓ So, the sunny season is from around May to November.

The phrase 'sunny season' needs the definite article 'the' and the verb 'is' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'with' is incorrectly used; 'from' is appropriate to indicate a time range.

× Then it is rainy season on November to December or January as well.

✓ Then it is the rainy season from November to December or January as well.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when indicating a range of months; 'from' is the correct preposition. Also, 'the' is needed before 'rainy season'.

× If I want to take a rest, I want the cold weather or rainy season so I can rest very well.

✓ If I want to take a rest, I want cold weather or the rainy season so I can rest well.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'cold weather' but needed before 'rainy season'. Also, 'very well' can be simplified to 'well' for natural expression.

× And in terms of hot, if I have something to do outside, I want to be on hot weather so that I can make my holiday productive.

✓ And in terms of hot weather, if I have something to do outside, I want it to be hot so that I can make my holiday productive.

The phrase 'be on hot weather' is incorrect; instead, 'want it to be hot' is appropriate. Also, 'in terms of hot' should be 'in terms of hot weather' for clarity.

× Actually it depends. Umm, if I want to be more productive, I want a dry weather so that my I can not.

✓ Actually, it depends. Umm, if I want to be more productive, I want dry weather so that I can.

'A dry weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and 'my I can not' is unclear; it is corrected to 'I can' for coherence.

× Well, uh, I'm, yes, I prone to check, uh, whether forecast, especially when there is a typhoon or so that we can prepare as a family.

✓ Well, uh, yes, I am prone to check the weather forecast, especially when there is a typhoon so that we can prepare as a family.

The phrase 'I prone to check' is missing the verb 'am'. 'Whether' is a homophone error; it should be 'weather'. Also, 'or so that' is incorrect; 'so that' suffices.

× Then example, we have an activity outside, so I tend to check the weather as well.

✓ For example, when we have an activity outside, I tend to check the weather as well.

'Then example' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'For example'. Also, adding 'when' clarifies the condition.

× Well, I think there are many negative effects on climate change because the past few years, umm the typhoons are expected on how many months?

✓ Well, I think there are many negative effects of climate change because in the past few years, umm, the typhoons are expected for many months.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'for' is appropriate to indicate duration. Also, 'effects on climate change' should be 'effects of climate change'. 'Because the past few years' needs 'in' to indicate time.

× But now it it comes and go.

✓ But now it comes and goes.

The verb phrase should be in the present tense with subject-verb agreement: 'comes' and 'goes' for singular subject 'it'. The repeated 'it' is a typo.

× Of course, I want to experience the cold weather, the winter because we do not have here in my country.

✓ Of course, I want to experience cold weather, winter, because we do not have it here in my country.

'The cold weather, the winter' is better as 'cold weather, winter' without repeated 'the'. Also, 'have here in my country' needs 'it' to complete the sentence.

× So I want to explore that to to experience different. Play meats.

✓ So I want to explore that to experience different places.

The phrase 'to to experience different. Play meats.' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'to experience different places' for clarity and proper sentence structure.