Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复，表达更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地描述不同季节的天气特点，并表达个人感受。

예시: The weather where I live varies a lot. Summers are very hot, winters are quite cold, and autumn is usually rainy. I find this change a bit challenging, especially the long rainy periods in autumn.

제안: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误。可以用连接词连接观点，并具体说明喜欢冷天气的原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel tired and anxious, so I usually stay indoors with air conditioning.

제안: 回答中应避免语法错误和表达不清。应清楚表达干燥天气的优点，并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable. For example, my clothes dry quickly in dry weather, unlike wet weather when everything feels damp and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答应更流畅，避免重复。可以用连接词组织句子，清楚说明查看天气预报的频率和原因。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day. It helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella to stay dry.

제안: 回答应更准确表达观点，避免语法错误。应具体说明气候变化的影响，并用清晰的例子支持。

예시: I believe air pollution is a major effect of climate change. For instance, increased use of air conditioners in summer contributes to higher energy consumption and worsens air quality.

제안: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误。可以具体描述不同气候的城市体验，并表达个人喜好。

예시: Yes, I enjoy visiting cities with different climates. For example, I have been to England, which is often rainy and people carry umbrellas. However, I didn't like that climate and prefer the weather in my hometown.

× in the autumn is always raining for monthly

✓ in the autumn it always rains monthly

这里介词使用错误，应该用主语+谓语结构表达“秋天总是每月下雨”，而不是用介词短语。

× I dislike and and I think that make me anxiety about that

✓ I dislike it and I think that makes me anxious about that

这里连词重复且句子结构不完整，应该用正确的连词连接两个完整句子，并且动词和形容词形式要正确。

× my hometown in a north city in the in the winter, that's a cold weather isn't that?

✓ My hometown is a northern city, and in the winter, the weather is cold, isn't it?

句子缺少谓语动词，结构不完整，需要补充be动词并调整句子顺序使其通顺。

× hot weather make me some anxiety and feel tired

✓ hot weather makes me anxious and feel tired

“make me some anxiety”表达不自然，应使用形容词“anxious”来描述感受。

× I just have to in the room with air condition

✓ I just have to stay in the room with air conditioning

缺少动词，且“air condition”应为“air conditioning”，介词使用不当。

× in the dry weather it make me more comfortable

✓ in the dry weather it makes me more comfortable

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s。

× when I washing my clothes they will dry in one day

✓ when I wash my clothes, they will dry in one day

动词形式错误，应使用一般现在时“wash”，且缺少逗号。

× But in the weather, white weather I think almost everything your clothes and your toilet almost give you a little white

✓ But in wet weather, I think almost everything, your clothes and your toiletries, almost get a little wet

代词使用错误，“white weather”应为“wet weather”，且“toilet”应为“toiletries”，句子结构混乱。

× checking the weather forecast is a good guideline to me choose what should I wear these days

✓ checking the weather forecast is a good guideline for me to choose what I should wear these days

介词使用错误，应使用“for me to do something”结构。

× And I almost every every day will see the weather forecast and I can make sure if it's if it is raining, I will bring, I will bring my umbrella to make sure I'm not white

✓ And I check the weather forecast almost every day, so I can make sure that if it is raining, I will bring my umbrella to make sure I don't get wet

句子结构混乱，重复用词，且“not white”应为“not get wet”。

× I think air pollution is the most effectors of climate change

✓ I think air pollution is the main cause of climate change

“most effectors”用法错误，应使用“main cause”表达主要原因。

× more and more people use air conditions during the summer break and it's how some something bad for the air condi air environment

✓ more and more people use air conditioners during the summer break, and it's somehow bad for the air environment

“air conditions”应为“air conditioners”，且“how some something”表达错误，应为“somehow”。

× Yes, I love to visit city with different climates

✓ Yes, I love to visit cities with different climates

“city”应为复数形式“cities”，因为指多个不同气候的城市。

× I think the reigning country and people outside always bring their umbrella to stay dry

✓ I think in the rainy country, people outside always bring their umbrellas to stay dry

“reigning”应为“rainy”，且缺少介词“in”，复数形式“umbrellas”。

× But I find I really dislike that climate so I prefer to leave my hometown

✓ But I find that I really dislike that climate, so I prefer to leave my hometown

缺少连词“that”，句子连接不顺畅，需加逗号分隔。