Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“prefer to hot”应为“prefer to go out”或类似表达。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性。

예시: In recent weeks, the weather has been sunny and the air feels fresh and clean. On sunny days, I like to go out with my friends to enjoy the sunshine.

제안: 回答没有直接表达个人偏好，且句子结构混乱。建议先明确表达喜欢冷天还是热天，然后给出理由，使用连贯的句子。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing warm clothes and drinking hot drinks. Also, cold weather feels refreshing to me.

제안: “white weather”表达不清晰，可能是想说“wet weather”。建议使用准确的词汇，并详细说明喜欢干燥还是潮湿天气及原因。

예시: I prefer wet weather because I love the fresh smell after rain and the gentle feeling of moisture in the air.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明习惯和频率，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

예시: I usually check the weather forecast every day on my phone to know if I need to take an umbrella. It helps me prepare for bad weather.

제안: 表达有语法错误，如“more higher”应为“higher”。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达对气候变化的看法，并提供具体例子。

예시: I think climate change has caused winters to be warmer than usual. This might be due to greenhouse gases and air pollution.

제안: 回答表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议明确表达态度，使用正确的句子结构，并给出具体理由。

예시: I prefer to stay in my own city because I feel comfortable with the climate and culture here. I don't like to adapt to new environments.

× In recent weeks, the weather here is sunny and the air condition is fresh and sweet.

✓ In recent weeks, the weather here has been sunny and the air condition is fresh and sweet.

句子描述的是最近几周的持续状态，应该使用现在完成时表示持续的动作或状态。

× In recent weeks, the weather here is sunny and the air condition is fresh and sweet.

✓ In recent weeks, the weather here has been sunny and the air conditions are fresh and sweet.

air condition 应为复数形式 air conditions，因为空气状况通常指多种因素。

× In sunny day, I always prefer to hot with my friend to enjoy sunshine.

✓ On sunny days, I always prefer to hang out with my friends to enjoy the sunshine.

day 应为复数 days，friend 应为复数 friends，表示泛指。

× In sunny day, I always prefer to hot with my friend to enjoy sunshine.

✓ On sunny days, I always prefer to hang out with my friends to enjoy the sunshine.

表示特定时间点应使用介词 on 而非 in。

× In sunny day, I always prefer to hot with my friend to enjoy sunshine.

✓ On sunny days, I always prefer to hang out with my friends to enjoy the sunshine.

动词 hot 用法错误，应使用 hang out 表示“出去玩”。

× I think the weather is colder and colder because the winter is coming so watch out yourself and wear more clothes to prevent the cold or a flu.

✓ I think the weather is getting colder and colder because winter is coming, so watch out for yourself and wear more clothes to prevent catching a cold or the flu.

表达天气变冷应使用进行时态 getting colder，watch out 后应加介词 for，prevent 后接动名词 catching。

× I think the weather is colder and colder because the winter is coming so watch out yourself and wear more clothes to prevent the cold or a flu.

✓ I think the weather is getting colder and colder because winter is coming, so watch out for yourself and wear more clothes to prevent catching a cold or the flu.

反身代词应为 yourself，watch out 后需加介词 for。

× I prefer the white weather because I love the mix of the air and the water.

✓ I prefer white weather because I love the mix of air and water.

white weather 不用加定冠词 the，air 和 water 作为不可数名词前不加 the。

× I prefer the white weather because I love the mix of the air and the water. It is so soft and gentle.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I love the mix of air and water. It is so soft and gentle.

white weather 用词不当，应为 dry weather 表示干燥天气。

× Maybe every day, because I will in advance, checking my phone on whether makes sure tomorrow I take the umbrella, whether or not I think the weather forecaster could help me to prepare the worst.

✓ Maybe every day, because I check my phone in advance to make sure whether I need to take an umbrella tomorrow. I think the weather forecast can help me prepare for the worst.

句子结构混乱，需调整语序和用词，使表达清晰。

× Maybe every day, because I will in advance, checking my phone on whether makes sure tomorrow I take the umbrella, whether or not I think the weather forecaster could help me to prepare the worst.

✓ Maybe every day, because I check my phone in advance to make sure whether I need to take an umbrella tomorrow. I think the weather forecast can help me prepare for the worst.

介词使用错误，in advance 应放在动词前，on whether 用法错误。

× Nothing serious, I just feel that in winter the temperature is more higher than average, I think because of the greenhouse and the contamination of the air.

✓ Nothing serious. I just feel that in winter the temperature is higher than average. I think it is because of the greenhouse effect and air pollution.

more higher 是错误的比较级表达，应直接用 higher。

× Nothing serious, I just feel that in winter the temperature is more higher than average, I think because of the greenhouse and the contamination of the air.

✓ Nothing serious. I just feel that in winter the temperature is higher than average. I think it is because of the greenhouse effect and air pollution.

contamination 用词不当，应使用 air pollution 表示空气污染。

× No, because I think I am a very typical person and I don't like to change to fit the other conditions, so I prefer in the city rather than going to another city to involve their culture or air condition or the climates.

✓ No, because I think I am a very typical person and I don't like to change to fit other conditions, so I prefer staying in my city rather than going to another city to experience their culture, air conditions, or climates.

介词使用错误，prefer 后应接动名词或名词短语，in the city 应改为 staying in my city，involve 用词不当，应为 experience。