Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What's the weather like where you live?
수험생
In my city the weather is quite humid, especially in summer when it is hot and sticky, making people feel sweaty. In winter when temperature drops, it gets cold, but it's bearable because it really snows.
시험관
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
수험생
If I must choose one from these two, I prefer cold weather because in cold weather it's bearable and sometimes when it snows it's beautiful to walk outside and make a snowman. However, if it is thundery, it's really humid and sweaty.
시험관
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
수험생
I was born in a city which is humid and wet, so I'm accustomed to the wet weather and I enjoy this weather instead of dry weather. In dry cities sometimes I feel really thirsty on my lips get cramped.
시험관
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
수험생
When and how often? No, I'm not in the habit of checking the forecast of weather. I like to check the weather forecast like once in a week when I feel bored, or sometimes when I just remember to check it, but not very frequently.
시험관
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
수험생
Due to climate change in recent years, I think there are more extreme heat in some cities in some countries. Like in some cities in my country, uh, the temperature might rise to over 40 sometimes during the, uh, summer.
시험관
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
수험생
Sure. I like some cities around the Mediterranean or around the Atlantic Ocean, and these cities in these areas usually have mild weather, not very high in summer and not very cold in winter. It's pleasant.
평가
총점
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“hot and sticky”与“making people feel sweaty”意思相近，显得冗余。可以增加更多具体细节，如具体温度范围或季节变化对生活的影响。
예시: The weather in my city is quite humid, especially during the summer when temperatures often exceed 30 degrees Celsius, making it uncomfortable. In winter, it gets cold enough to snow, which I find quite enjoyable.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中应避免重复使用“cold weather”，并且“thundery”与问题无关，显得偏题。建议直接说明喜欢冷天气的原因，并用连词连接观点。
예시: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for me, and I enjoy snowy days when I can go outside and build a snowman. In contrast, hot weather often feels oppressive and sweaty.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答较好，但“on my lips get cramped”表达不准确，应改为“my lips get chapped”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连词使句子更流畅。
예시: I prefer wet weather because I grew up in a humid city and am used to it. In dry places, my lips often get chapped, which is uncomfortable.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中出现重复提问“when and how often”，且表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。
예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. Maybe once a week or whenever I happen to remember, but not very often.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“more extreme heat”应为“more extreme heat events”。避免使用口头语“uh”，并提供更具体的例子。
예시: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme heat events in many cities. For example, in my country, summer temperatures sometimes rise above 40 degrees Celsius.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加更多细节说明为什么喜欢这些气候，比如具体的气温范围或活动。
예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities around the Mediterranean or Atlantic Ocean because they have mild climates, with warm summers and cool winters, which I find very comfortable and enjoyable for outdoor activities.
문법
× Due to climate change in recent years, I think there are more extreme heat in some cities in some countries.
✓ Due to climate change in recent years, I think there is more extreme heat in some cities in some countries.
这里的heat是不可数名词，前面的more不需要复数形式的are，应该用is。
× No, I'm not in the habit of checking the forecast of weather.
✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast.
英语中通常说weather forecast而不是forecast of weather，of的使用不正确。
× I like to check the weather forecast like once in a week when I feel bored, or sometimes when I just remember to check it, but not very frequently.
✓ I like to check the weather forecast about once a week when I feel bored, or sometimes when I just remember to check it, but not very frequently.
表达频率时，应该用about once a week而不是like once in a week，like用法不当。
× In dry cities sometimes I feel really thirsty on my lips get cramped.
✓ In dry cities sometimes I feel really thirsty and my lips get cramped.
原句缺少连接词and，导致句子结构不完整，且thirsty后面不应该直接跟on my lips。
× In dry cities sometimes I feel really thirsty on my lips get cramped.
✓ In dry cities sometimes I feel really thirsty and my lips get cramped.
这里需要用连词and连接两个并列的动作，原句缺少连词，导致句子结构错误。
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