Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式描述天气，如使用完整句子并正确使用形容词。

예시: The weather here is like autumn, with a gentle breeze and a bit of cold.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和主谓一致，同时丰富词汇表达感受。

예시: I prefer hot weather in summer because I enjoy the sunshine. It gives me more energy and makes me feel happier and healthier.

제안: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确区分干燥和潮湿天气，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

예시: I prefer dry weather because humid weather makes my skin oily and causes pimples, which is not good for me.

제안: 回答中表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子并正确表达查看天气预报的目的。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day. It helps me decide what clothes to wear the next day.

제안: 回答内容丰富但语法和表达不准确，建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯，注意词汇准确性。

예시: I think climate change has caused many serious problems recently. For example, air pollution from cars and factories has worsened the environment, leading to extreme weather events like floods and heat waves. These changes harm nature and also affect people's health.

제안: 表达不够自然且有语法错误，建议使用更地道的表达方式，注意主谓一致和词汇选择。

예시: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates. It would allow me to experience different weather and lifestyles, which I think would be very interesting.

× It's like a fall, it's a little breeze and the cold.

✓ It's like fall, there's a little breeze and it's cold.

这里“a fall”用法不正确，应该用“fall”表示季节，不需要冠词；另外，原句中缺少“there is”结构来描述天气现象。

× It makes me more energy and make my body healthy and make I feel more happy.

✓ It makes me more energetic, makes my body healthy, and makes me feel happier.

“more energy”应改为形容词“more energetic”；“make I feel”中的“I”应为宾格“me”；“more happy”应为比较级“happier”。

× I prefer hot weather because white weather let my body feel more humid and my body will healed a red pimples.

✓ I prefer hot weather because wet weather makes my body feel more humid and my body will heal red pimples.

“white weather”应为“wet weather”；“let”应改为“makes”更合适；“will healed”时态错误，应为“will heal”；“a red pimples”中“a”与复数“pimples”不匹配，应去掉冠词。

× It can make me sure to decisions.

✓ It can help me be sure about decisions.

“make me sure to decisions”结构不正确，应使用“help me be sure about decisions”表达更自然。

× claim change has crossed many serious effects in recent years

✓ climate change has caused many serious effects in recent years

“crossed”用词错误，应为“caused”表示“引起”；另外“claim change”应为“climate change”。

× this changes not only harm natural but also infected people they.

✓ These changes not only harm nature but also infect people.

“this changes”应为复数“these changes”；“natural”应为名词“nature”；“infected people they”结构错误，应为“infect people”。

× I am willing to visit other cities that have different climate.

✓ I am willing to visit other cities that have different climates.

“different climate”应为复数“different climates”，因为指多个城市的不同气候。

× It can makes me experience others whether and life.

✓ It can let me experience others' weather and life.

“makes”应为“let”更合适；“others whether”应为“others' weather”；“others”后面需要所有格。

× I think maybe it's a funny things.

✓ I think maybe it's a funny thing.

“a funny things”中“a”与复数“things”不匹配，应改为单数“thing”。