Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating the two seasons and avoiding redundancy. Also, use plural forms correctly and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

예시: In the Philippines, we have two main seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. The dry season is usually sunny and warm, while the rainy season brings frequent showers and cooler temperatures.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and slightly expanding your explanation with specific examples.

예시: I prefer cold weather because when it's hot, I often feel irritable and lazy. However, in cold weather, I feel more energetic and productive, which helps me complete my tasks efficiently.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Also, avoid unnecessary articles like 'a' before uncountable nouns like 'wet weather'. Try to complete your thoughts and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rainy season. It creates a cozy atmosphere that encourages me to stay indoors and focus on my work or hobbies.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Also, checking the weather only once a month seems infrequent. Try to complete your answer with clear frequency and reasons, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I usually check the weather forecast several times a week, especially before important meetings or appointments. This helps me plan my day and dress appropriately.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition. Try to complete your thoughts and provide specific examples of climate change effects. Avoid repeating words and use linking phrases for clarity.

예시: Although I'm not an expert, I have noticed that climate change has caused more extreme weather in my area. For example, some places have become prone to flooding due to heavier rains.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct prepositions and verb forms, and make your sentences more concise and natural.

예시: Definitely, I would like to visit countries with different climates. Since I'm used to the dry and rainy seasons in the Philippines, experiencing places with four seasons would be exciting and enjoyable.

× In our country, the Philippines, we have two weather season.

✓ In our country, the Philippines, we have two weather seasons.

The noun 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to two distinct periods, so the singular form is incorrect here.

× We have sunny season, sunny and rainy seasons.

✓ We have the sunny season and the rainy season.

The phrase is inconsistent and redundant. It should be 'the sunny season and the rainy season' to correctly refer to the two distinct seasons. Also, 'sunny season' should be singular to match 'rainy season'.

× I prefer a wet weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Using 'a' before 'weather' is incorrect.

× So when it's raining I.

✓ So when it's raining, I stay home and am productive.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. It needs to be completed to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So I would often check my.

✓ So I would often check my phone or the weather app.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It needs a complete object to make sense.

× because of climate change changes in in the weather, there are areas in our place that have become flood prone and.

✓ because of climate change and changes in the weather, there are areas in our place that have become flood-prone.

The phrase 'climate change changes' is redundant and awkward. It should be 'climate change and changes in the weather'. Also, 'flood prone' should be hyphenated as 'flood-prone'. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× especially those countries who have two or more seasons because I used to the dry and rainy season of the Philippines and I guess it would be fun and exciting to have also experienced other countries with different weather seasons.

✓ especially those countries that have two or more seasons because I am used to the dry and rainy seasons of the Philippines, and I guess it would be fun and exciting to experience other countries with different weather seasons.

The relative pronoun 'who' is incorrectly used for countries; 'that' is correct. The phrase 'I used to the dry and rainy season' is missing 'am' to form 'I am used to'. Also, 'have also experienced' is incorrect in this context; 'to experience' fits better. The plural 'seasons' should be used consistently.