Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达温度。

예시: The weather where I live is generally sunny and warm. For instance, winters are mild with temperatures around 20°C, which is quite comfortable. In contrast, summers can be very hot, often reaching 37°C or higher.

제안: 回答中出现了“hot water”的错误，应为“hot weather”，同时可以增加更多具体细节和连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer hot weather because it is ideal for outdoor activities such as swimming and hiking. For example, when the weather is warm and sunny, I feel more energetic and motivated to swim.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词增强句子流畅性。

예시: I prefer wet weather because I find it comfortable and refreshing. Moreover, having lived in South China for over 20 years, where it is often humid and rainy, I have become quite accustomed to such conditions.

제안: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“It's been solid”不合适，应改为更自然的表达，同时注意句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast in the morning and sometimes in the evening. This helps me plan my day better, such as deciding what to wear or whether to bring an umbrella.

제안: 句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更清晰。

예시: I think one significant effect of climate change is the increase in human pollution, which has led to global warming. As a result, we are experiencing more severe weather conditions.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“varies”应为“various”，并且句子连接不够自然，建议使用更合适的连接词。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live. This way, I can experience various weather conditions. For example, in colder cities, I can enjoy snow and winter activities.

× It's been solid to decide what I should to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

✓ It's been helpful to decide what I should wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

句中 'should to wear' 是错误的，情态动词 'should' 后面直接接动词原形，不加 'to'。此外，'been solid' 用词不当，改为 'been helpful' 更合适。

× I think that the one significant effect of climate change has been the increase in human pollution which has led to global warming, as a result causes much severe weather.

✓ I think that one significant effect of climate change has been the increase in human pollution which has led to global warming, as a result causing much more severe weather.

句中 'the one significant effect' 中 'the' 不必要，且 'as a result causes' 结构不正确，应改为 'as a result causing'，使句子结构连贯。

× Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I lived.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live.

此处谈论的是现在居住地，应该用一般现在时 'live'，而不是过去时 'lived'。

× Because of that I can feel varies weather conditions.

✓ Because of that I can feel various weather conditions.

'varies' 是动词形式，句中需要形容词 'various' 来修饰复数名词 'weather conditions'。