Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and singular/plural), use a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail. Keep within 1–3 sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: The weather where I live is usually hot and sunny. However, we sometimes have rainy days during the monsoon season, especially in July and August.

제안: Start with a clear statement of preference (cold), correct vocabulary (avoid 'cold water' and 'temper'), and give two concise specific reasons using linking words (because / so). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I get sunburned easily and feel uncomfortable in high temperatures. As a result, I feel more relaxed and enjoy spending time outdoors when it is cool.

제안: Use correct verb forms and complete the thought. Give a reason and one specific example; use a linking word (because/so) to connect ideas. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

예시: I prefer dry weather because rain often splashes mud onto my clothes when I walk around my neighborhood. Therefore, I find dry days more convenient for going out.

제안: Produce a clear topic sentence about your habit, use correct verb forms and remove fillers. Add one specific detail about frequency and purpose. Keep it within 2 sentences and use linking words (but / because).

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I always look it up when I travel to another city or country. I check it a few days before the trip because I want to pack appropriate clothes.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence about one or two effects. Remove hesitations and correct grammar. Support with a specific example or comparison (e.g., hotter summers, less predictable rains). Use linking words (for example / as a result). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I think climate change has made temperatures higher in my country and altered rainfall patterns. For example, summers are hotter than before and the rainy season is less predictable, which affects farming.

제안: Answer directly and correct grammar (use 'visit' and 'see snow'). Give a specific reason and a short detail about what you want to do; avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep to 2 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a city with a snowy climate because I have never seen snow before. I would love to try activities like walking in the snow and taking photos of the snowy landscape.

× In my place the weather usually are hot and sunny.

✓ In my place the weather is usually hot and sunny.

The verb 'are' is plural but the subject 'the weather' is uncountable singular, so use singular verb 'is'. Place adverb 'usually' typically goes before main verb. Suggestion: use 'the weather is usually...'.

× Sometime it's have a rainy day.

✓ Sometimes there's a rainy day.

The original uses 'it's have' which is ungrammatical. Use 'there is' contraction 'there's' to indicate existence ('There be' issue) and pluralize 'Sometimes'. Also 'rainy day' fits with 'there's'. Suggestion: say 'Sometimes there's a rainy day' or better 'Sometimes it rains'.

× Actually I prefer cold water.

✓ Actually I prefer cold weather.

The student likely meant 'cold weather' not 'cold water'. Use the adjective 'cold' with the noun 'weather'. Suggestion: check noun choice to match context.

× I don't enjoy being too hot temper temperature uh.

✓ I don't enjoy being too hot.

Redundant and mixed words 'hot temper temperature' are incorrect. Simplify to 'being too hot'. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and avoid repeating synonyms.

× It's make me sunburned and I feel comfortable when the temperature is low.

✓ It makes me sunburned, and I feel comfortable when the temperature is low.

Use third person singular 'makes' with subject 'it'. Also add a comma before conjunction joining independent clauses. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it makes'.

× It's make me relax and spend time outdoor and have.

✓ It makes me relax and spend time outdoors.

Again use third person singular 'makes'. 'Outdoor' should be the adverb 'outdoors'. The trailing 'and have' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestion: complete ideas fully and use correct adverb forms.

× I prefer dry weather because wet weather make the make my clothes dirty when I go around my place.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my clothes dirty when I go around my place.

Use third person singular 'makes' to agree with singular uncountable 'wet weather'. Remove duplicated 'the make'. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I'm not usually check the weather forecast, umm, but when I, uh, travel another city or another country, I usually check the temperature because I I wanna make sure.

✓ I don't usually check the weather forecast, but when I travel to another city or country, I usually check the temperature because I want to make sure.

Use correct negative form 'do not/ don't' with base verb 'check' rather than 'I'm not usually check'. Add preposition 'to' after 'travel'. Replace colloquial 'wanna' with 'want to' and remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: use auxiliary 'do' for present simple negatives and include necessary prepositions.

× Uh, in my case, uh, in my country, I think, uh, calm climate change, uh, it's make temperature is hotter because it many years will mean my country have usually have grainy, but now it's not common. It's a little rainy in my country.

✓ In my country, I think climate change has made temperatures hotter. Many years ago it used to be dry, but now it is a little rainier.

Original has multiple errors: incorrect tense and structure. Use present perfect 'has made' to describe change over time. 'Temperature is hotter' should be 'temperatures hotter' or 'made temperatures hotter'. 'Many years will mean' is wrong; use 'many years ago it used to be dry'. 'Have usually have grainy' unclear—interpreted as 'usually dry'. Use 'rainier' to compare. Suggestion: express past habit with 'used to' and use present perfect for changes up to now.

× Yes, I want to visit another city have a different climate.

✓ Yes, I want to visit another city that has a different climate.

Missing relative pronoun 'that' and verb agreement: 'city that has' required. Suggestion: use relative clauses 'a city that has...'.

× I really like snow I but I haven't seen it before so I want a ride to the city have a snow.

✓ I really like snow, but I haven't seen it before, so I want to go to a city that has snow.

Fix connector placement: 'snow I but' is incorrect. Use commas and conjunction 'but'. Replace 'want a ride to' with 'want to go to' and add relative clause 'that has snow'. Suggestion: use correct conjunctions and verb patterns and 'has snow' for existence.