Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 表达总体意思清晰，但句子较长且有重复。应使用主题句开头并用一到两句支持细节，注意标点和连贯词，如“generally”或“mostly”。可以加入一两个具体例子来丰富内容。

예시: Generally the weather where I live is quite comfortable. It is warm rather than hot for most of the year, so I enjoy going for walks and outdoor meals on weekends.

제안: 回答表达有逻辑问题和用词不当（例如“frightening”与语境不符）。句子较冗长且含糊。应直接给出偏好，然后解释原因并用合适词汇（comfortable/uncomfortable）和连接词（because/so）组织两句以内。

예시: I prefer hot weather to cold weather because I enjoy outdoor sports. When it's cold, it's uncomfortable to play basketball and I usually feel demotivated.

제안: 答案重复“comfortable/uncomfortable”而缺少具体细节。建议先直接给出偏好，然后说明具体原因并举例，比如对皮肤或呼吸的影响，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer wet weather to dry weather because dry air irritates my skin and throat. For example, in dry winters I often need a humidifier to feel comfortable.

제안: 意思明确但有口误和重复（“It ha.”、“every every day”）。应用简洁结构回答频率和时间，避免填充词，并可补充如何查看（app/website/TV）。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for work. I usually use a weather app on my phone to see the temperature and any rain alerts.

제안: 观点正确但过于简短和泛泛而谈。建议先给主题句，然后列举一到两个具体影响（如极端天气、海平面上升），并说明原因或结果，使表达更具体有说服力。

예시: I think climate change has increased the frequency of extreme weather events. For example, there have been more intense storms and heatwaves recently, which damage infrastructure and disrupt people's lives.

제안: 回答态度自然但有填充词（“I guess”, “Umm”）和略显重复。建议用一到两句明确表态并说明原因或具体想体验的气候特点，同时尽量减少口头语。

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I want to visit Beijing to experience its colder, drier winters and see how daily life differs from my city.

× Well, the weather in the place I live is quite comfortable most of the time it's very warm but not very hot, so I really enjoy the temperature here.

✓ Well, the weather in the place where I live is quite comfortable most of the time. It's very warm but not very hot, so I really enjoy the temperature here.

句子中缺少关系词“where”来引导地点定语从句；此外原句为长句且缺少标点，导致语义不清。建议在“place”和“I live”之间加“where”，并用句号分隔两部分。注意现在时描述常态时使用一般现在时。

× I prefer hot weather than cold because when the weather is very frightening, it is very uncomfortable to go out for activities like basketball, which makes me real frustrated.

✓ I prefer hot weather to cold because when the weather is very frightening, it is very uncomfortable to go out for activities like basketball, which makes me really frustrated.

动词短语“prefer”后应接介词短语“prefer A to B”，不能用“than”。“real frustrated”中的“real”应为副词“really”修饰形容词“frustrated”。另外“frightening”可接受，但语境可改为“terrible”或“bad”。

× I think wet weather is much more comfortable than dry because it makes me feel very uncomfortable when the weather is too dry.

✓ I think wet weather is much more comfortable than dry weather because I feel very uncomfortable when the weather is too dry.

比较结构中需保持两边表达对称，原句将“dry”作为形容词单独使用显得不完整，应改为“dry weather”。此外后半句更自然的表达为“I feel very uncomfortable”。

× Yes, I often check the weather forecast before I go out for work. It ha. It happens in the morning and I do it every every day.

✓ Yes, I often check the weather forecast before I go out for work. It happens in the morning and I do it every day.

原句有语音/拼写错误“It ha.”应为“It happens”。重复词“every every day”应为“every day”。使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作是正确的，修正为规范的现在时表达。

× I think a lot of severe problems caused by climate change, such as natural disasters, are more frequent than before.

✓ I think many severe problems caused by climate change, such as natural disasters, are more frequent than before.

“a lot of severe problems”语法上可用但与后续定语搭配不够简练，建议使用“many severe problems”。总体句子结构需保持主语与谓语一致，原句也可接受但修改后更自然。

× Yes, I guess I would give it a try in the future. Umm, Beijing is the first destination I want to go. The weather there is quite different from here.

✓ Yes, I guess I would give it a try in the future. Umm, Beijing is the first destination I want to go to. The weather there is quite different from here.

动词短语“want to go”后通常需接介词“to”加地点（go to Beijing）。原句缺少“to”。其余句子使用将来或一般现在时陈述愿望与事实均恰当。