Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and provide one specific supporting detail (e.g., a typical season or temperature). Use linking words if adding reasons or exceptions.

예시: The weather where I live is usually cloudy and windy. For example, during autumn and winter we often have overcast skies and temperatures around 5–10°C, although there are a few sunny days in spring.

제안: Give a direct answer then a brief, specific reason without repeating. Avoid fillers and absolute phrases like "100%"; instead mention a relatable consequence or example.

예시: I prefer hot weather because I tend to catch colds in winter. For instance, in summer I feel healthier and enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and barbecues.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Choose one option, give a concise reason and a specific example of a drawback of the other option. Reduce hesitations and complete your final sentence.

예시: I prefer dry weather because humid conditions feel sticky and uncomfortable. For example, in rainy summers my clothes get damp and I find it hard to stay comfortable outdoors.

제안: Respond with a clear frequency and brief explanation. Use correct verbs and avoid vague phrases. If you only check informally, say when and how (e.g., apps, window, news).

예시: No, I don't check forecasts regularly. Usually I only look outside or check a weather app briefly before leaving the house to see if it's sunny, windy, or rainy.

제안: Give a clear opinion supported by a specific effect even if you are not an expert. Avoid saying you are uninterested; instead acknowledge observable changes (e.g., warmer temperatures, more storms). Use linking words to structure the answer.

예시: I believe climate change has caused warmer average temperatures and more extreme weather events. For example, recent summers have been hotter than before and we sometimes see heavier storms in autumn.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason and a specific example of a place or climate you'd like to experience. Reduce repetition and filler words.

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new environments. For example, I'd like to visit a Mediterranean city like Nice to enjoy warm, sunny weather and clear beaches.

× And generally the weather is cloudy because I live in Europe and as the people knows, Europe is generally cloudy and windy.

✓ And generally the weather is cloudy because I live in Europe and as people know, Europe is generally cloudy and windy.

The original sentence uses 'the people knows' which is incorrect: 'people' is a plural noun and requires the base verb form 'know' (subject-verb agreement). Remove the article 'the' before 'people' because 'people' here refers to people in general. Suggestion: use 'people know' or 'people there know'.

× So almost every day, umm, except some days and generally it's cloudy.

✓ So almost every day, except for some days, it is generally cloudy.

The phrase 'except some days' is awkward; use the preposition 'for' with 'except for some days'. Also avoid contractions in formal responses: 'it's' to 'it is'. Ensure clear sentence structure.

× I definitely prefer hot weather because when the weather is winter, it's uh, every year I'm sick so I don't want to be sick.

✓ I definitely prefer hot weather because in winter I get sick every year, so I don't want to be sick.

'When the weather is winter' is unidiomatic. Use 'in winter'. Verb order was awkward: 'it's uh, every year I'm sick' should be 'I get sick every year'. This corrects tense and word order for clarity.

× So I prefer 100% hot weather and hot countries definitely.

✓ So I definitely prefer hot weather and hot countries.

The original repeats adverbs and places 'definitely' awkwardly. Move 'definitely' before the verb for natural emphasis: 'I definitely prefer'. Avoid '100%' in spoken grammar corrections unless emphasizing; here 'definitely' suffices.

× Uh, that is a tough question because the both of them, it's not OK, but, uh, if I had to choose one, I would choose probably dry weather because I think it's better than to be wet weather.

✓ Uh, that is a tough question because both of them are not ideal, but if I had to choose one, I would probably choose dry weather because I think it is better than wet weather.

Errors: 'the both of them' -> 'both of them' or just 'both'; 'it's not OK' should be 'are not ideal' to match plural subject; 'I would choose probably' -> 'I would probably choose' (adverb placement); 'better than to be wet weather' is ungrammatical. Compare 'dry weather' and 'wet weather' directly: 'better than wet weather'.

× I just, uh, check the air when I, when I need to go outside. I just checking the weather.

✓ I just check the weather when I need to go outside. I just check whether it is sunny, cloudy, windy, or rainy.

'I just checking the weather' is missing the auxiliary verb for progressive ('I am just checking') or should use simple present 'I just check'. Here simple present fits habitual action: 'I just check'. Also 'check the air' is unnatural; use 'check the weather' or 'check whether it is...'.

× Umm, no, actually I'm not there and I'm not interested with the Czech air.

✓ Umm, no, actually I'm not into that and I'm not interested in the Czech weather.

'Interested with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'interested in'. 'Not there' is unclear—replace with 'not into that' or 'not like that'. Also 'Czech air' is unnatural: say 'Czech weather'.

× I just, uh, look at look down.

✓ I just look it up or I just look it up on my phone.

The phrase 'look at look down' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'look it up', 'look at the forecast', or 'look on my phone' depending on intended meaning. Choose a clear verb + object structure.

× I think it's not change that, uh, a lot of change.

✓ I don't think it has changed much.

Original mixes tenses and word order. Use present perfect 'has changed' to discuss recent changes up to now, and 'much' for quantity: 'has changed much' -> 'has not changed much'.

× I think it's not change a lot of because I'm not interested and I'm not, umm, prefer to check the weather for the years.

✓ I don't think it has changed a lot because I'm not interested and I don't usually check the weather over the years.

Multiple errors: 'it's not change a lot of' -> 'it has not changed a lot'; 'I'm not ... prefer' should be 'I don't usually prefer' or better 'I don't usually check'. Use consistent negative forms and appropriate verbs: 'check the weather over the years' rather than 'for the years'.

× I just look, uh, when I need to look, you know?

✓ I just look when I need to, you know?

Redundant 'look' twice makes the sentence clumsy. Remove repetition: 'I just look when I need to'. Keep tag 'you know?' at end.

× Yes, actually I would love to. It sounds great because I love to travel and I am I can see the the other cities for the how, how is the weather in there?

✓ Yes, actually I would love to. It sounds great because I love to travel and I can see other cities to find out what the weather is like there.

Original has repetition ('I am I can'), incorrect phrase order ('for the how, how is the weather in there'). Rephrase: 'I can see other cities to find out what the weather is like there' is grammatically correct and natural.

× It's it would be nice actually, I think it's great things.

✓ It would be nice actually; I think it's a great idea.

'It's it would be nice' duplicates subjects; use one clause. 'Great things' is vague and uncountable here—use 'a great idea'. Use articles appropriately: 'a' before singular count noun 'great idea'.