Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议直接回答问题并用简单句表达习惯，避免冗余。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually don't eat snacks because I prefer to have three regular meals a day. However, I sometimes enjoy a small snack like fruit if I feel hungry between meals.

제안: 回答内容具体且相关，但可以用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I think eating snacks is not healthy for me because my stomach is weak. For example, I cannot eat ice cream or drink coffee since they cause me stomach aches.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议用完整句子表达，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child because, like many children, I found snacks a good way to relax after finishing my homework.

제안: 回答内容具体，但有语法错误和口语填充词，建议用更自然的表达和连接词。

예시: My favorite snacks are bread and cake. For instance, if I feel hungry between meals, I usually buy some bread or cake to satisfy my hunger.

× To be honest, I didn't have a habit of eating snacks before or after meal.

✓ To be honest, I didn't have a habit of eating snacks before or after meals.

The word 'meal' should be plural 'meals' because it refers to any meal in general, not a specific one. This is a singular and plural issue, but since it relates to the past tense context, it is categorized under past tense issue here.

× Actually, though I do love some snacks, I still didn't eat too much or.

✓ Actually, though I do love some snacks, I still didn't eat too much.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or' which is incomplete and causes sentence structure error. Removing 'or' completes the sentence properly.

× For sure, I often eat snacks when I was a child.

✓ For sure, I often ate snacks when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'eat' with past time 'when I was a child'. The verb should be in past tense 'ate' to match the time frame.

× For uh, nearly every children.

✓ For uh, nearly every child.

'Every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'children' (plural) should be changed to 'child' (singular). This is a singular and plural issue.

× I think eating snacks is the very good way for us to, uh, unwind after finishing our homeworks.

✓ I think eating snacks is a very good way for us to, uh, unwind after finishing our homework.

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. Also, 'the very good way' is better as 'a very good way' to indicate one of many ways.

× OK, when it comes to my favorite snacks, I will say the bread and cake.

✓ OK, when it comes to my favorite snacks, I will say bread and cake.

'Bread' and 'cake' are uncountable nouns here and do not need 'the'. Also, 'the bread and cake' implies specific items, but here it refers to general types of snacks.

× Umm for example, when I was hungry but it's not the time for a meal, I will be more likely to buy some bread or cakes for me.

✓ Umm for example, when I was hungry but it was not the time for a meal, I was more likely to buy some bread or cake for myself.

The sentence mixes past and present tense; 'it's' should be 'it was' to match past tense 'when I was hungry'. Also, 'cakes' should be singular 'cake' to match 'bread' as uncountable or singular noun. 'For me' is better expressed as 'for myself' to indicate the beneficiary.