Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法结构。

예시: I usually eat snacks every night around 9:00 PM because having only lunch is not enough for me.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法混乱，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

예시: Actually, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat, which can harm my body.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用正确时态，清晰表达过去的习惯，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child because my parents usually bought them for me, but now I don't like eating snacks as much.

제안: 回答中表达混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议明确表达喜欢的零食，并用恰当的词汇描述。

예시: I like eating chips because they are very tasty and crunchy, which makes them my favorite snack.

× I usually eat snacks at every every night because I think just have lunch uh is not enough for me so I often eat snacks at 9:00 PM.

✓ I usually eat snacks every night because I think just having lunch is not enough for me, so I often eat snacks at 9:00 PM.

句中“at every every night”重复且用法错误，应改为“every night”。此外，“just have lunch”缺少动名词形式，应改为“just having lunch”。

× Actually I don't think so. I think snacks is it is bad for my body and it's and it also works for my health to eat.

✓ Actually, I don't think so. I think snacks are bad for my body and they also harm my health.

“snacks”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“it is”和“it's and it also works”表达混乱，应简化为“they also harm”。

× Yes, I do uh, when I was, when I was a child, I like eat snacks and my parents often buy snacks for me, but maybe uh, may I eat much So I didn't like to eat now.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I liked to eat snacks and my parents often bought snacks for me, but maybe I ate too much, so I don't like to eat them now.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，如“did”、“liked”、“bought”、“ate”。“may I eat much”表达错误，应为“ate too much”。

× I like cheese because I think chips for me it is delicious and or tasty for me. Uh, I like it chips very much.

✓ I like cheese because I think chips are delicious and tasty for me. I like chips very much.

“chips”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“it chips”结构错误，应直接说“chips”。