Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'snack'의 복수형과 관사 사용에 주의하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually eat snacks after my meals as a convenient dessert.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

예시: I usually eat snacks after my meals because they serve as a convenient and enjoyable dessert.

제안: 발음 오류('snag' 대신 'snack')와 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확히 하고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 답변을 풍부하게 하세요. 또한, 연결어를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 만드세요.

예시: I don't think all snacks are healthy; it depends on the type. For example, some snacks contain nutrients, but others are high in sugar and fat.

제안: 문장이 완성되지 않았고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 과거 시제를 사용하고, 명확한 이유와 구체적인 설명을 포함하여 답변을 완성하세요.

예시: When I was young, I enjoyed eating snacks because they had different textures, which I found very interesting.

제안: 문법 오류와 중복 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 최근 경험을 구체적으로 설명하며 연결어를 사용하세요.

예시: I like eating cookies because they come in various interesting flavors. Recently, I have enjoyed visiting cookie shops to try new varieties.

× Yes, I eat snack almost every day because I really like to eat a snack after I finish my meal for dessert, which is very convenient dessert for me.

✓ Yes, I eat snacks almost every day because I really like to eat a snack after I finish my meal for dessert, which is a very convenient dessert for me.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' when referring to eating them regularly in general. Also, 'a very convenient dessert' needs the article 'a' before 'very convenient dessert' to be grammatically correct.

× I wouldn't say a snag is healthy for my health because I think it depends on which snake it is.

✓ I wouldn't say a snack is healthy for my health because I think it depends on which snack it is.

The words 'snag' and 'snake' are incorrect spellings and should be 'snack' to match the intended meaning.

× For example, some snack they have nutrition but it doesn't have every snack.

✓ For example, some snacks have nutrition but not every snack does.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' when referring to some of them. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and subject-verb agreement.

× When I was young, I really like to enjoy.

✓ When I was young, I really liked to enjoy.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was young'.

× It eating snacks because they have really different kind of texture.

✓ I enjoyed eating snacks because they have really different kinds of texture.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure. 'It eating snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'I enjoyed eating snacks'. Also, 'different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' to match 'texture'.

× So for me it was very interesting so I really.

✓ So for me, it was very interesting, so I really liked them.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'liked them' completes the thought. Also, commas improve readability.

× I definitely say cookies because it has various interesting flavour recently so it made me wanted to try.

✓ I definitely say cookies because they have various interesting flavours recently, so they made me want to try them.

'Cookies' is plural, so pronouns and verbs should agree: 'they have' instead of 'it has'. 'Flavour' should be plural 'flavours'. 'Made me wanted' is incorrect; it should be 'made me want'.

× So I really like to go cookie shop.

✓ So I really like to go to cookie shops.

The phrase 'go cookie shop' is missing the preposition 'to' and 'cookie shop' should be plural 'cookie shops' to indicate places.

× That's my my favorite things recently.

✓ Those are my favorite things recently.

'That' is singular but 'things' is plural, so 'Those are' is correct. Also, removing the repeated 'my'.