Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了吃零食的原因，但语言不够自然且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I feel upset or stressed because it helps me relax and improve my mood.

제안: 回答内容混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏逻辑。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，避免语法错误。

예시: I think some snacks, like nuts, are healthy because they contain nutrients that can improve brain function.

제안: 回答中有很多重复和语法错误，表达不完整。建议用简单句子清楚表达过去的习惯和感受。

예시: When I was young, I often ate snacks because they attracted me and made me feel happy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，词汇使用不准确。建议用连贯的句子表达喜欢的零食及其优点。

예시: I like eating nuts and chocolate because they taste delicious and provide good nutrition that benefits brain function.

× I I usually to eat snacks because it is a good way to relax my bad mood and make me feel relaxed.

✓ I usually eat snacks because it is a good way to relax my bad mood and make me feel relaxed.

这里多了一个不必要的to，动词后面直接用动词原形eat即可。动词+to是不正确的用法。

× I didn't think it because I like it some not but not it's not junk food and it because they have more portion in it and it's good.

✓ I don't think so because I like it. It's not junk food and it has more nutrients in it, so it's good.

这里时态混乱，应该用一般现在时表达习惯性观点。并且句子结构混乱，需要拆分和调整。

× It is good for our body and we will if we eat this nuts can it can improve my brains.

✓ It is good for our body and if we eat these nuts, it can improve my brain.

nuts是复数，前面的this应改为these；brains应为单数brain。

× When I was young, I'm interested in eating snacks because it it because snacks always attract me and and I'll I want to buy it and it is snacks can make me feel happy and and make me.

✓ When I was young, I was interested in eating snacks because snacks always attracted me and I wanted to buy them. Snacks could make me feel happy.

描述过去的事情，时态应使用过去时。

× I prefer it nuts and chocolate I think is very delicious and and these have many nutrition.

✓ I prefer nuts and chocolate. I think they are very delicious and have a lot of nutrition.

nuts和chocolate是复数，代词it应改为they，nutrition是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× They they have nutrition and it's good for our brown functions.

✓ They have nutrition and are good for our brain functions.

brown应为brain，代词it应改为are对应复数主语they。