Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa shizen de, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I usually eat snacks after work when I get home.' to iikata o hajime ni shite, sono ato ni motto shousai na jouhou o tsuika shite kudasai. Mata, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunpou wa saisho wa sakete, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

예시: I usually eat snacks after work when I get home. For example, I like to eat simple snacks like banana cake because it is tasty and healthy.

제안: Kotae wa motto meikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui eigo o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, some snacks are healthy, but others are not good for the body.' to iikata o shiyou shite, sono ato ni riyuu ya reigai o tsuika shite kudasai. Mata, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya imi ga fumei na kotoba wa saisho wa sakete kudasai.

예시: Yes, I think some snacks are healthy, like fruits, but others, such as chips, are not good for the body because they contain too much fat.

제안: Kotae wa kanzen ni shite, shitsumon ni chokusetsu kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I often ate snacks like chocolate and candy when I was young.' to iikata o shiyou shite, ima no koudo to kurabete setsumei o tsuika shite kudasai.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks like chocolate and candy when I was young, but now I prefer healthier options.

제안: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunpou wa saisho wa sakete, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I like healthy snacks such as banana cake and protein bars.' to iikata o shiyou shite, riyuu ya shousai o tsuika shite kudasai.

예시: I like healthy snacks such as banana cake and protein bars because they help me stay fit and provide energy.

× I usually eat, they snack, umm, every, every after work and I'm, I'm going home and I'm eating these snacks like a simple snack like, uh, cake or banana cake.

✓ I usually eat snacks every day after work when I go home, like simple snacks such as cake or banana cake.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms and has unclear structure. 'They snack' is unnecessary and confusing. 'Every, every after work' is redundant. The correction uses plural 'snacks' consistently and clarifies the timing and examples.

× It's the poor, it's good for the health.

✓ It's good for health.

'The poor' is incorrect and unclear here. Also, 'the health' should be 'health' without the article. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× Yes it's for the healthy food is OK and some eating the bad food like Chicharria it is a bird in the body and I like the.

✓ Yes, healthy food is okay, but some people eat bad food like chicharrón, which is harmful to the body, but I like it.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'for the healthy food is OK' is awkward; 'some eating the bad food' lacks subject-verb agreement; 'Chicharria' is likely 'chicharrón'; 'it is a bird in the body' is incorrect and unclear. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× When I was young, yes, I eat the snacks like uh, umm. Chocolate candy and yeah, but now I'm.

✓ When I was young, yes, I ate snacks like chocolate candy, but now I don't.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match 'when I was young'. The sentence was incomplete; the correction completes the thought appropriately.

× I like uh, snacks, uh, like, uh, uh, healthy, healthy food, like a bodybuilding a food and uh, umm. Banana egg cake and.

✓ I like healthy snacks, such as bodybuilding food and banana egg cake.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'Bodybuilding a food' is incorrect; it should be 'bodybuilding food'. The correction removes filler words and clarifies the meaning.