Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to form complete sentences and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually eat snacks after school and before I go to sleep because I tend to feel hungry at those times.

제안: Make sure your answer is clear and relevant. Use correct grammar and avoid confusing phrases. Provide reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy for me because many snacks contain a lot of sugar and fat, which can be bad for my health.

제안: Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Provide clear and complete supporting details with logical linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, I frequently had chips or candy after school because they were convenient and tasty.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and add some details or reasons to enrich your answer.

예시: I like to eat candy and mooncakes because they are sweet and remind me of special occasions.

× I after school and before I sleep because I will be hungry at that time.

✓ I eat snacks after school and before I sleep because I will be hungry at that time.

The original sentence lacks a main verb, making it incomplete and unclear. Adding the verb 'eat' clarifies the action and completes the sentence structure.

× It takes no, is not healthy for me, but English tastes tasty and I really love it.

✓ No, it is not healthy for me, but snacks taste tasty and I really love them.

The pronoun 'It' is incorrectly used to refer to snacks, which is plural. Also, 'English' seems to be a typo for 'snacks'. Correcting the pronouns to 'it' for singular and 'them' for plural, and fixing the noun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I often eat snacks when I was young.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young.

The sentence mixes present tense 'eat' with past time reference 'when I was young'. The verb should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the time frame.

× For example, I frequently have chips or candy after school because they were convinced and.

✓ For example, I frequently had chips or candy after school because they were convenient and tasty.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'convenient and tasty' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Like to eat? I would like to eat candy and mooncakes.

✓ What snacks do you like to eat? I would like to eat candy and mooncakes.

The first sentence is a fragment and does not form a complete question. Rephrasing it to a full question improves clarity and grammatical correctness.