Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构重复且冗长，建议简化句子并直接回答问题，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I usually eat snacks rarely because I want to maintain a healthy diet and avoid gaining weight.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅，建议使用连贯的句子并减少重复，同时具体说明原因。

예시: I think eating snacks is unhealthy because they often contain high sugar and unhealthy fats, which can harm my health.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用正确时态和连贯句子，明确表达过去的习惯和原因。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I didn't know they were unhealthy, and they tasted delicious.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不准确，表达混乱，建议使用准确的词汇并列举具体的零食名称，句子简洁明了。

예시: I like to eat sweet and salty snacks such as potato chips, biscuits, candies, and also some convenient beef jerky.

× So and also snacks is very delicious and and so I usually eat snacks when I'm young.

✓ So and also snacks are very delicious and so I usually ate snacks when I was young.

snacks 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are；另外，句子描述过去的习惯，动词时态应为过去时 ate 和 was。

× when I'm young and because I don't know, these snacks are uh, very unhealthy food to my body.

✓ when I was young and because I didn't know, these snacks were uh, very unhealthy food to my body.

描述过去的情况，时态应使用过去时，动词 am 和 do not 应改为 was 和 did not，are 应改为 were。

× Yeah, they're many.

✓ Yeah, there are many.

这里应使用 there are 来表示“有很多”，而不是 they're（they are）。