Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to provide a more complete answer by adding reasons or examples, and use linking words to make your response more natural and coherent. For example, explain why you choose that time to eat snacks.

예시: Usually, I eat snacks between lunch and dinner because I feel hungry in the afternoon, and having a light snack helps me stay energized until dinner.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct opinion first, then explain with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I think eating snacks can be healthy if you choose fruits or vegetables instead of candies because they provide essential nutrients and energy without too much sugar.

제안: Your answer does not address the question. Make sure to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially after school. However, I didn't eat too many because my parents encouraged me to eat healthy food.

제안: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure. Also, add reasons or descriptions to make your answer more interesting and detailed.

예시: My favorite snacks are chocolate, chips, and energy drinks because they taste good and give me a quick boost of energy when I feel tired.

× That's based on time of snacks if you eat fruits or vegetables. All candies.

✓ It depends on the time of snacks and whether you eat fruits or vegetables, not candies.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and connectors. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, complete sentence using conjunctions and proper phrasing.

× When are you going to eat snacks but not a lot?

✓ Did you eat snacks often when you were young, but not a lot?

The original sentence is a question that does not fit the context and is grammatically incorrect. The correction rephrases the sentence to match the past tense question asked by the examiner and clarifies the meaning.

× Most snack I like is chocolate and chips and energy drinks.

✓ The snacks I like most are chocolate, chips, and energy drinks.

The original sentence has singular 'snack' with plural items and incorrect word order. The correction uses plural 'snacks' and corrects the order to properly list multiple items.