Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать излишней длины. Например, можно сказать, что обычно не предпочитаешь перекусывать, но иногда ешь их по выходным с друзьями.

예시: I usually don't prefer eating snacks because they are unhealthy for my body. However, I sometimes have snacks once a week, usually on Saturdays when I go for a coffee break with my friends.

제안: Ответ не ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно четко выразить мнение и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Следует объяснить, почему считаешь перекусы нездоровыми и предпочитаешь спорт.

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy. I believe they are bad for the body, and I prefer to stay fit by doing sports and building good muscles.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более вежливые выражения. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для плавности.

예시: When I was young, I used to eat snacks every day. Now, I don't like that habit because it caused me to have weight problems. Therefore, I think eating snacks daily is very bad for health.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Нужно использовать правильные формы глаголов и связующие слова. Также стоит конкретизировать любимые перекусы.

예시: I usually don't prefer eating snacks because they are unhealthy. However, I like to eat some chocolate, and sometimes when I watch TV, I eat popcorn or chips.

× I didn't prefer eat snacks because it's very unhealthy to my body, but I eat snacks one part of week, maybe in Saturday when I'm going with my friend to coffee break time.

✓ I didn't prefer to eat snacks because they are very unhealthy for my body, but I eat snacks once a week, maybe on Saturday when I go with my friend for coffee break.

The sentence has incorrect past tense usage and verb forms. 'Didn't prefer eat' should be 'didn't prefer to eat' to correctly use the infinitive after 'prefer'. 'It's very unhealthy to my body' should be 'they are very unhealthy for my body' to agree in number and use correct preposition. 'One part of week' is incorrect; 'once a week' is the correct expression. 'In Saturday' should be 'on Saturday' as the correct preposition for days. 'When I'm going' should be 'when I go' to match the habitual action. Suggestions: Use correct infinitive after 'prefer', correct plural forms, and appropriate prepositions for time expressions.

× I didn't prefer eat snacks because it's very unhealthy to my body, but I eat snacks one part of week, maybe in Saturday when I'm going with my friend to coffee break time.

✓ I didn't prefer to eat snacks because they are very unhealthy for my body, but I eat snacks once a week, maybe on Saturday when I go with my friend for coffee break.

The prepositions 'to my body', 'in Saturday', and 'to coffee break time' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'for my body', 'on Saturday', and 'for coffee break'. Prepositions must match the context and collocations in English. Suggestions: Use 'for' with health effects, 'on' with days, and 'for' with events or activities.

× No, I think it's nice. It's very unhealthy to the body because I'm just bored umm everyday. And to me it's better than have a sport body and good muscles. So I don't like eating snacks.

✓ No, I don't think it's nice. It's very unhealthy for the body because I'm just bored every day. And to me, it's better to have a sporty body and good muscles. So I don't like eating snacks.

The sentence has tense and word choice issues. 'I think it's nice' contradicts the context; it should be negative. 'Unhealthy to the body' should be 'unhealthy for the body'. 'I'm just bored umm everyday' is awkward; 'every day' is two words and 'umm' is filler and can be omitted. 'Better than have' should be 'better to have'. 'Sport body' should be 'sporty body'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions, verb forms, and adjective forms; avoid fillers in formal speech.

× When I was young I eating snacks every day and I don't like it because now I have more problems with my weight.

✓ When I was young, I ate snacks every day and I didn't like it because now I have more problems with my weight.

The verb 'I eating' is incorrect; it should be past tense 'I ate' to match 'when I was young'. Also, 'I don't like it' should be 'I didn't like it' to maintain past tense consistency. Suggestions: Use past tense verbs when referring to past events.

× When I was young I eating snacks every day and I don't like it because now I have more problems with my weight.

✓ When I was young, I ate snacks every day and I didn't like it because now I have more problems with my weight.

The sentence does not have preposition errors here; this is a correction of verb tense. No preposition correction needed.

× I'm very fat girl so I think to eating snacks everyday it's very bad for your health.

✓ I'm a very fat girl, so I think eating snacks every day is very bad for your health.

The phrase 'to eating' is incorrect; it should be 'eating' without 'to'. Also, 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'common'; the correct form is 'every day' as two words for frequency. 'I'm very fat girl' needs an article 'a'. Suggestions: Use correct article, remove unnecessary 'to' before gerund, and use 'every day' for frequency.

× I am usually didn't prefer to eating snacks because it's unhealthy for my body, but I am like to eat some chocolate and maybe when I'm watching TV I'm eat some popcorns or chips.

✓ I usually don't prefer eating snacks because they're unhealthy for my body, but I like to eat some chocolate and maybe when I'm watching TV I eat some popcorn or chips.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'I am usually didn't prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually don't prefer'. 'To eating' should be 'eating' without 'to'. 'I am like to eat' should be 'I like to eat'. 'I'm eat' should be 'I eat'. 'Popcorns' is incorrect; 'popcorn' is uncountable. Suggestions: Use correct auxiliary verbs for negation, correct verb forms, and uncountable nouns.