Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest naturalna, ale zawiera powtórzenia i nieco niejasności. Staraj się unikać powtarzania słów oraz używaj spójników, aby odpowiedź była bardziej płynna i logiczna.

예시: I usually avoid snacks because they are often unhealthy; however, I enjoy eating chips or sweet snacks during parties or when I meet with my friends.

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest zrozumiała, ale zawiera błędy gramatyczne i niejasne wyrażenia. Skup się na poprawnym użyciu struktur gramatycznych i precyzyjnym wyrażaniu myśli.

예시: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many of them are unhealthy. I prefer to eat balanced meals that provide nutrition and protein.

제안: Twoja odpowiedź zawiera błędy gramatyczne i niejasności. Zwróć uwagę na poprawne formy czasowników i precyzyjne wyrażanie opinii oraz doświadczeń.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially because my grandma gave me many, like sweet buns and chips. However, now I don't have a sweet tooth as I did back then.

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest zrozumiała, ale zawiera powtórzenia i niepoprawne wyrażenia. Staraj się używać spójników i poprawnych struktur, aby odpowiedź była bardziej naturalna i spójna.

예시: Sometimes I crave something sweet like chocolate or sweet buns. I also enjoy salty snacks like chips because they help me relax after a hard day.

× but maybe on some parties, on or on the meetings with my friends I like to eat chips or or sweets, sweet snacks.

✓ but maybe at some parties or meetings with my friends, I like to eat chips or sweet snacks.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'parties' and 'meetings'. The correct preposition is 'at' for events like parties and meetings. Also, the phrase 'or or' is redundant and should be simplified to 'or'.

× I love to eat uh, balance, uh, dish like that will nutritious me and have some proteins.

✓ I love to eat a balanced dish like that which will nourish me and have some proteins.

The phrase 'balance dish' is incorrect; it should be 'balanced dish' (adjective form). Also, 'will nutritious me' is incorrect; the verb 'nourish' should be used instead. The sentence also lacks the article 'a' before 'balanced dish'.

× but it don't affect on me so I don't feel bad with it.

✓ but it doesn't affect me so I don't feel bad about it.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'doesn't' (third person singular). Also, the preposition 'on' after 'affect' is incorrect; 'affect' is a transitive verb and does not require a preposition. The phrase 'feel bad with it' should be 'feel bad about it'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and preposition usage.

× but it don't affect on me so I don't feel bad with it.

✓ but it doesn't affect me so I don't feel bad about it.

The preposition 'on' after 'affect' is incorrect; 'affect' is a transitive verb and does not require a preposition. Also, 'feel bad with it' should be 'feel bad about it' to correctly express the feeling related to something.

× Sometimes I have craving for something sweet like chocolate or or some sweet buns and I also like chips because they are salty so it helps me with after the hard day.

✓ Sometimes I have a craving for something sweet like chocolate or some sweet buns, and I also like chips because they are salty, so they help me after a hard day.

The phrase 'I have craving' is missing the article 'a'. The repeated 'or or' is redundant. The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'chips' (plural), so it should be 'they'. The phrase 'helps me with after the hard day' is awkward; it should be 'help me after a hard day'. These corrections improve pronoun agreement, article usage, and sentence clarity.