Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，时态混乱，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地回答问题，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after I finish my homework. For example, I like to have some fruit or cookies while watching TV or playing video games.

제안: 表达不清晰，词汇重复且语法错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of oil and sugar. Therefore, I try to eat them less often.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性，时态使用不当，且内容简单。建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially during my free time after school.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，缺少连贯的句子结构。建议用完整句子描述喜欢的零食，并说明原因。

예시: I like to eat cookies, chocolate, and candies because they are sweet and delicious. Sometimes, I also enjoy savory snacks like fish crackers.

× I back my home and finished my homework.

✓ I went back home and finished my homework.

这里应该使用过去时态，动词back用错了，正确表达是went back，表示“回家”。

× the snacks have so many oil oils

✓ the snacks have so much oil

oil是不可数名词，不能用复数形式oils，且用many修饰不可数名词错误，应使用much。

× I can eat eat less than.

✓ I can eat less.

less已经表达减少的意思，后面不需要than，且重复了eat。

× I always like eat snacks when I was free.

✓ I always like eating snacks when I was free.

like后面应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形eat。

× I always like eat snacks when I was free.

✓ I always liked eating snacks when I was free.

句子描述过去的习惯，like应使用过去式liked。

× For example, the cookies or some fish pieces or chocolate, the candies and so on.

✓ For example, cookies or some fish pieces or chocolate, candies and so on.

复数可数名词前不需要定冠词the，除非特指。这里不特指，应去掉the。

× I think it's so so sweet and delicious.

✓ I think it's very sweet and delicious.

so so是口语中表示一般的意思，但在正式表达中应使用very来加强语气。